August 10, 2009

LIFE...!!!


Beauty
Is not the world
It’s the heart you live with
Enjoy it as the way you see
Its life..!!!

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6 comments:

  1. hey Yamii, i like ur thought flow dear!

    just edit the third line please...

    "It’s the heart you live with" has 7 syllables coz "it's" is expanded as "it is"

    :)

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  2. Nicely done Yamini... :)

    These days even I am thriving on Cinquains... :)

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