July 12, 2009

She Cares

Take everything away
Won’t you ease my pain?
The light inside will start to fade
You and I will both forget
The things you said no longer runnin’ through my mind

As the rain pours down,
My tears fall
Our memories together, they’re all gone
The pain is at ease
But it’s not you who’s there
Unlike you, she cares




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8 comments:

  1. hey dude its not an acrostic....
    the poem is good.....

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  2. thanks alot bro.... but i thought it wasn't .... and somehow the label thingy automatically makes it acrostic :s

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  3. yeah, the poem's nice....

    I liked the subtle way of putting up the fact, 'she cares'.

    Nice one :)

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  4. will she really care??..tats my worry :(

    else nice work dude..

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  5. nice write ubaid..
    short,simple n expressive... love it..

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  6. @Purple Princess:
    thanks alot :)

    well i had to push my words here....

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  7. @Bard:
    somebody will care... somebody actually will!!

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  8. @Arun:
    thanks alot, when you get some time do check my blog :)

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