July 12, 2009

She Cares

Take everything away
Won’t you ease my pain?
The light inside will start to fade
You and I will both forget
The things you said no longer runnin’ through my mind

As the rain pours down,
My tears fall
Our memories together, they’re all gone
The pain is at ease
But it’s not you who’s there
Unlike you, she cares




Check out my blogs for more:

This Impression By @
Categorized As ,

8 comments:

  1. Dr.KumarSunday, July 12, 2009 8:01:00 PM

    hey dude its not an acrostic....
    the poem is good.....

    ReplyDelete
  2. UbaidSunday, July 12, 2009 8:37:00 PM

    thanks alot bro.... but i thought it wasn't .... and somehow the label thingy automatically makes it acrostic :s

    ReplyDelete
  3. PURPLe PRiNCeSSMonday, July 13, 2009 5:57:00 AM

    yeah, the poem's nice....

    I liked the subtle way of putting up the fact, 'she cares'.

    Nice one :)

    ReplyDelete
  4. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"Monday, July 13, 2009 11:33:00 AM

    will she really care??..tats my worry :(

    else nice work dude..

    ReplyDelete
  5. Arun KumarMonday, July 13, 2009 7:19:00 PM

    nice write ubaid..
    short,simple n expressive... love it..

    ReplyDelete
  6. UbaidWednesday, July 15, 2009 5:58:00 PM

    @Purple Princess:
    thanks alot :)

    well i had to push my words here....

    ReplyDelete
  7. UbaidWednesday, July 15, 2009 5:58:00 PM

    @Bard:
    somebody will care... somebody actually will!!

    ReplyDelete
  8. UbaidWednesday, July 15, 2009 5:58:00 PM

    @Arun:
    thanks alot, when you get some time do check my blog :)

    ReplyDelete

Comments are sexy.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)