“Just leave me alone dad”,she shouted insanely.
His soul teared apart.He stepped forward, sat beside her.
She was crying endlessly,her tears hitting the photograph in her hand.
He touched her shoulder,she blasted out her entangled painful emotion with the touch,
hugged him tightly and cried “Why dad….Why he broke my heart...?”
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ReplyDeletereally good
hey mera comment kaha gaya???
ReplyDeletephir se likhna padega...nice theme...n yea i continues it...from the dad's point of view
@thank ste ;)
ReplyDelete@thnks..n u continue my theme I loved it.
ReplyDeleteNice write...
ReplyDelete@ A good write Vidisha! Emotions well portrayed!
ReplyDelete@arun-thnks..!!
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ReplyDelete@thanks a lot Aarthi..;)
ReplyDeleteVery good for first one!!! :)
ReplyDelete@thanks thoorika
ReplyDeleteemotional one vidisha
ReplyDeleteThis was a very good 55 fiction Vidisha!
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