July 24, 2009

BROKEN HEARTS..!!



In this tiring world,
That just spins beneath my feet..
Dizzy mazes and confusing faces,
Story outside your heart,
Is a mystery you cannot let anybody dart..

Fast is faster,
Hurt is bigger,
Burnt are the vices,
Which you hold against me..
Graceful are the roads and fly-by arches,
Held down by inhuman crutchs,
But do tell me how to mend a broken heart..!!
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7 comments:

  1. FreelancerFriday, July 24, 2009 9:08:00 PM

    nice write

    oh i wish i cud tel you how to mend a broken heart!
    *sigh*

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  2. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"Friday, July 24, 2009 10:46:00 PM

    even god cant answer tis-.."But do tell me how to mend a broken heart..!!" :D

    very nice work gal..

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  3. FreelancerSaturday, July 25, 2009 1:42:00 AM

    oi rashmi....label this poem under ur name...or it wil be lost

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  4. RASHMI RAOSaturday, July 25, 2009 10:40:00 AM

    What do u mean..??
    Could someone explain what tagging means? I am a dumbass when it comes to computers and stuff..

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  5. Yamini MeduriSaturday, July 25, 2009 2:47:00 PM

    you can attach every broken piece in the world but not a broken heart...when u get to know about it....let me know ok..!!

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  6. Arun KumarSaturday, July 25, 2009 6:49:00 PM

    nice poem rashmi..
    the first two lines .... are awesome...

    labelling is a way to easily find old posts.. archive them under ur name or by type..

    Google says Main hoon na..

    http://www.google.com/support/blogger/bin/answer.py?hl=en&answer=44498

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  7. PS the PratsieSunday, July 26, 2009 9:58:00 AM

    nicely put !! loved the first three lines of second para (sorry , m too lay to copy them :$) !!

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