July 30, 2009

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lakh chupaana chaaha,dil ko behlaana chaaha,
khwaad jo dekhe,unhe bhool jaana chaaha,
kuch na hua to tumse door jaana chaaha..

roz naye bahaane dhoonde tumko na chahne ke,
nit naye karan bhooje tumko na paane ke,
phir bhi teri aas me,baithe hain dil haar ke..

(more might continue ...)

8 comments:

  1. dil hi to hai aakhir,
    kaise de bahane iss na dhadakne ke,
    tumhi se to hai duniya hasseen,
    Zindagi ko kaise hukum de bin chah ke jine ke!


    couldn't help composing a 4 lines after reading yours.

    lovely girl ...loved it :)

    u are making me to write hindi after long....even though i write crap now ....but keep making me practice i might return to old me soon :P

    Love ya
    mwaahz

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  2. left me thinking ;)...

    btw guess it had 2b "khwaab" n not "khwaad" as u've typed :P

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  3. direct DilSe...kinda post...loved it..!!

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  4. teri chahat rasta bana kar chale the hum,
    dil tujhe de kar andho ki tarah nikal pade hum,
    socha tha har mod badhega pyar tera,
    par teri to manjil hi bewafaai thi.

    sorry this 4 lines from my side if you like add them as you more might continue.

    superb lines prats you writer very well in hindi
    gr8 going

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  5. aha..barhiya hai :))..

    "nit naye karan bhooje" what does it mean?

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  6. guessing it should be "khwaab" and " dhoonte"...

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