tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post1790068713658057649..comments2023-11-03T18:40:49.451+05:30Comments on The Writers Lounge: !!!!Sandeep Balanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09497006740037526922noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-61684262806571673432009-08-01T07:13:30.006+05:302009-08-01T07:13:30.006+05:30guessing it should be "khwaab" and "...guessing it should be "khwaab" and " dhoonte"...hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-19560102824677981432009-08-01T07:11:37.778+05:302009-08-01T07:11:37.778+05:30aha..barhiya hai :))..
"nit naye karan bhooj...aha..barhiya hai :))..<br /><br />"nit naye karan bhooje" what does it mean?hasHAN hazaRIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006513103278670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-16407427075509389632009-07-31T08:27:24.373+05:302009-07-31T08:27:24.373+05:30teri chahat rasta bana kar chale the hum,
dil tujh...teri chahat rasta bana kar chale the hum,<br />dil tujhe de kar andho ki tarah nikal pade hum,<br />socha tha har mod badhega pyar tera,<br />par teri to manjil hi bewafaai thi.<br /><br />sorry this 4 lines from my side if you like add them as you more might continue.<br /><br />superb lines prats you writer very well in hindi<br />gr8 goingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-50305290429390886492009-07-31T07:33:15.707+05:302009-07-31T07:33:15.707+05:30direct DilSe...kinda post...loved it..!!direct DilSe...kinda post...loved it..!!Yamini Medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11723116856510079269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-56758212854840946192009-07-30T22:40:59.269+05:302009-07-30T22:40:59.269+05:30left me thinking ;)...
btw guess it had 2b "...left me thinking ;)...<br /><br />btw guess it had 2b "khwaab" n not "khwaad" as u've typed :P"THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"https://www.blogger.com/profile/01259526056401693310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-65547200885013237942009-07-30T15:34:49.552+05:302009-07-30T15:34:49.552+05:30dil hi to hai aakhir,
kaise de bahane iss na dhada...dil hi to hai aakhir,<br />kaise de bahane iss na dhadakne ke,<br />tumhi se to hai duniya hasseen,<br />Zindagi ko kaise hukum de bin chah ke jine ke!<br /><br /><br />couldn't help composing a 4 lines after reading yours.<br /><br />lovely girl ...loved it :)<br /><br />u are making me to write hindi after long....even though i write crap now ....but keep making me practice i might return to old me soon :P<br /><br />Love ya <br />mwaahzmysterious galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09498778855432030397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-70051927681112162312009-07-30T12:58:22.017+05:302009-07-30T12:58:22.017+05:30The last line hit me! :(
Sigh!The last line hit me! :(<br /><br />Sigh!Nyxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00384530455049386902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878684769651514469.post-63532126467593846192009-07-30T12:43:16.359+05:302009-07-30T12:43:16.359+05:30good prats..!!!.good prats..!!!.ViDiShAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09575769838570546253noreply@blogger.com