..set these hearts to fire Or burn these unending desire..
..blind these teary eyes Or kill these dreamy vibes..
..bleed these untouched hands Or scratch these criss-cross lines..
..drown these sinking breaths Or snatch these unbearable wounds..
..blind these teary eyes Or kill these dreamy vibes..
..bleed these untouched hands Or scratch these criss-cross lines..
..drown these sinking breaths Or snatch these unbearable wounds..
..bury these wandering souls Or tear these shrinking hopes ..
P.s. As this is my first post on WL,Hope u all v'l nglct my faults.
wow... nice poem...
ReplyDeleteloved the first 3 lines very much....
n welcome to the lounge vidisha...
keep on writing...
Me too loved to first three lines... :)
ReplyDeleteGood one to begin with!
A warm welcome to you Vidisha... :)
Keep writing...waiting to read you writes!
Love,
Artz!
Welcome to the Lounge Vidisha.
ReplyDeleteWonderful post. Keep writing
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ReplyDeleteGood lines... thoughtful...
ReplyDeleteWelcome to TWL, Vidisha!
Keep writing and keep learning... ask people to find out your faults - not to neglect them... ;)
a warm welcome to the family...made quite a first impression
ReplyDeleteVidisha- Nice name:)
ReplyDeleteMeaning??
And Wow! Nice poem!
thanks a lot Arun,Aarthi,BlossomBlue,Tan & freelancer... n Tan I agree wid u but it was my first time so jst needed litl bit of motivation...n thanks a lot all of u..:)
ReplyDelete@thanks Princess..!!! n Vidisha mean opposite direction
ReplyDeletelovely poem......
ReplyDeleteAmazing choice of Pic. too.......
i really liked the way this was presented :) welcome to our family !!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the lounge..
ReplyDeleteIts a beautifully written opening..
hoping to see you more often here..:)