June 21, 2009

My first Acrostic- "I MISS YOU"

I MISS YOU

I didn't expect this end

Many days we spent together
Instilled in us the friendship
Shattered into pieces now
Sorry from my side

Yearning for the old relationshp i am
Obliviated by ur friendship
Useless I am without u......

Its a crossposting.....

7 comments:

  1. nice beginning considering it ur first acro....kip it coming mate

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  2. good one !! write on ...

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  3. Thanx Prats......
    Any advice regarding this???

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  4. reads mine!!
    http://musingsofthebardofmumbai.blogspot.com/2009/06/i-love-you-acrostic.html

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  5. Great!! For your first attempt it's really good!

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  6. Wow.. nice.. better than my attempt! :P :)

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