June 17, 2009

The Chemistry!

“How about a walk?”

She smiled warmly and replied, “Sure”

Both of them started walking on the pavement. It was 10 in the night and the road was quiet. Neither of them spoke anything but the silence was not suffocating either. They enjoyed the silence and savoured each passing second, spent in each other’s company.

It was cloudy, but they enjoyed the breeze. Suddenly the weather changed its mind and rain started pouring! She started running and took the shelter under the big banyan tree nearby. He started laughing and stood right there, enjoying the feeling of the raindrops on his face. She gave her warm smile again. He looked at her and suddenly saw something in her eyes. What was it? The same look of love, which he had in his eyes. For her!!

Both of them looked at each other, transfixed on the spot. He took a step towards her. She went a step back. He smiled and went near her. Slowly! Suddenly, she turned away, smiling to herself. He smiled and touched her tender hand. She shivered. Not because of the cold rain, but because of his warm and loving touch. Then she slowly faced him.

Yes, he was right!

He can see the love in her eyes. Love for him!

He can see the desire in her eyes. The same desire, which he had!

He can see the longing in her eyes. It didn’t hint any lust, but mere passion!

“OK, CUT”, the director shouted, “Good Shot, both of you! I can almost feel the chemistry”

The hero and the heroine smiled at the director and went to their respective chairs, while the spot boys cleaned up the so called “rain” on the set!


  1. Nice narration n twist... good write...

    "the silence was not suffocating either"
    Loved this expression... superbo...

  2. Great twist Thoorika... I wasn't expecting it!

  3. Hey Arun Thank you very much! Glad that you liked that line. I love it too!!!

  4. spot on !!
    really cute !!

  5. i wld have loved it if the director part wasnt there... It was full of love.. serious love.. :)

    good post thoorz..!!


  6. You wud hav loved it huh?! So now u dont like it huh?! :D THanks Arjun!!! :)

  7. now.. i like it.... if tat wasnt there.. then i wld have loved it.. hehe :P

    Lovely post da...

  8. ha ha.. :D Nevertheless Thank you very much Arjun!! :)


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