We love each other and yet we fight
How do we explain this plight
For those who don't have the foresight
This is just to make things light
Let not grudges be held
We have fences to mend
Bruised hearts to tend
Needless Squabbles to end
Come, lets join hands
And promise time's sands
Never again in this land
Will there be a fighting band
How do we explain this plight
For those who don't have the foresight
This is just to make things light
Let not grudges be held
We have fences to mend
Bruised hearts to tend
Needless Squabbles to end
Come, lets join hands
And promise time's sands
Never again in this land
Will there be a fighting band
its the need of hour !!! perfect timing and feelings dude !!
ReplyDeletethat was the motivation of course...hope it helps:)
ReplyDeletevery nicely written, im going thru such a time right now..hope our friendship conquers all misunderstandings.. thanku.
ReplyDeletehmmm..well written bt we actually need ppl with heart to understand this...thoughtfull..:)
ReplyDelete@Prats
ReplyDeleteAameen!!!
@Roshni
ReplyDeleteam sure it will conquer all, keep the faith dear:)
@Rose
ReplyDeleteam sure v all hv a heart within...even if its hidden beneath lies n malice, it is thr n hopefully it shines through in the end!!!
I really really loved this! Amazing..well done :)
ReplyDeleteThe need of the day..lots of silly fights goin on betweeen friends...
ReplyDelete'let not grudges be held
we have fences to mend'
Fight and make up afterwards is also fun :)
ReplyDeleteSuperb!! I just loved it!!
ReplyDeleteThe message...very well conveyed!
Cheers
*PEACE*
Aameen. :D
ReplyDeletePerfect :)) Loved it bro !!
ReplyDeletedoor the par,
ReplyDeletedil ke kareeb the,
kuchh dil toote,
thode badle naseeb the,
bas jab di tune,
dil se awaaz,
kadam ruke hi nahi,
le aaye humein waapas!
tu jaanta hai na,
aye musafir,
yaaro ki yaari ke kisse,
ajeeb hain,
aur ajeeb the!!
I am labelling all my comments on your posts under 'saim shayari' in my inbox!! :D
ReplyDeletejab hum aapko padhte hain,
lafz rukte hi nahi hain,
hum to bus,
dil ki dhadkan suna karte hain,
aur afsana likha jata hai!!
ufffffff! :D