May 9, 2009

Love me,do you?

Lots of friends you have
Over dozen girls flatter you,
Very few of them knw though
Evry thing that is loved by you.

Most of the time you flirt with rest,
Evn when you know them so very less.

Deluded you roam aimlessly for love,
Only to return to me when hopelessly hurt.

You think you are not good enough for me
Or do you jst refuse to accept your love,
Undecstand dear,i feel blessed to be loved by you.,

10 comments:

  1. pratsie,

    this is sooo beautiful.
    the spelling errors are not to be counted since u r on a cellphone, so i will just count the emotion.

    well written! :)

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  2. fantabulous....
    romantic...are yu...eh???

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  3. Selfless love, should I say..

    Great work, girlie!!

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  4. Wow Prats,

    This is what is love...selfless!

    Good!

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  5. The Urge ... the want ... the need was visible in the piece ...

    Good One Pratibha :)

    Come back soon and write more ...

    When you come back, please correct a few spelling mistakes in it...

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  6. I know this emotion.. it is a familiar feeling.. hats off Pratsie..

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  7. @Leo : thanks for confirming .. when i wrote it, i knew its a good one !! :) this feeling happens rarely with me though !

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  8. @FL : no dude.. i am no romantic person.. u will soon know :)


    @Aarthi, Zendagi : yup !! thats selfless and true love :)

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  9. thanks Hashan, Tan and Kajal for your wonderful feedback !!

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