May 15, 2009

Just two pricks



I
will
not scar
your beauty
my queen of dark night,
just two little pricks on your skin-
that is all i need
to drink the
nectar
from
you

14 comments:

  1. Oh Prats!
    When will this ordeal end at the lounge,
    Couldnt sleep last night
    The vamps, the death haunted me,
    All of us here have the spooky bone in us,
    But what if we save it for some other time,
    As they say everything in excess is bad !!

    LOL!!
    I loved it Prats..:D
    And don't mind whatever I just wrote, wrote it just like that:D

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  2. arrey u r very true dear .. i know that excess kills the thrills .. it happened before with irresistible series too !! :)

    i hope people will heed to your suggestion !!


    And i do not mind anything at all at lounge except my guest ;) thanks for the read dear ...

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  3. hehehe...I hope:)
    And I'm really in a mood to write, that's why bear with me...Wont post many of them though, just the spontaneous comments :D

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  4. hhehehehee :D me not posting anymore scary poems .. ;) but this one was gooooooooooood! :D

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  5. pratsie,
    this is beautiful yaar!

    but give it a title na! :)
    u r queen of fibs...
    come to think of it, u r queen of all poetry! :D

    loved it! :D
    more vampires? :O
    sonshu will love it :) :)

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  6. dark fib!!! wonderful! nice one Prats! :)

    back in full form r we! :)

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  7. Rose .. post anything any much anytime u want !! this is your home sweetie :)

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  8. thank yoooooooooooooooooooou Pinkie :)

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  9. put the title now Leo !! and hope she does like it !! though i could not find Edward's pic ;)

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  10. Glad u liked it Mav !! no one writes dark better than you though ;)

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  11. nice one pratsie... the sentence/word arrangement was really good.. and really interesting line... straight out from a dracula quote... ;)

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  12. yeah the pretty lady came with a bang on vampires :) Fantastic Prats !!

    yeah guys will not write on this will switch to a different topic :))

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  13. Pratsie dear.. hahah the pic made me shy and the poem.. Scary!

    Planning to be away from WL on fridays.. Scary la..

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