"love you",
i hear you say
almost everyday.
each time
i smile,
before i reply.
"love you too"
i whisper
but not to you.
You know it all
even if i deny
its not false.
so hard i tried
to never accept it,
to myself i lied.
never wanted to lose
your love and care
that cured my blues.
was so very happy
with whatever i got
never asked for anything.
but i now ask
in your true love,
will i get to bask.
Ah! enough of dreams
let me put to rest,
false hopes of you n me.
I will be gone soon
far away from you
and wnt give past a look.
you do deserve more
some one you would love
and cherish a lot.
One last farewell i do
a last time, i say
"I love you"
i hear you say
almost everyday.
each time
i smile,
before i reply.
"love you too"
i whisper
but not to you.
You know it all
even if i deny
its not false.
so hard i tried
to never accept it,
to myself i lied.
never wanted to lose
your love and care
that cured my blues.
was so very happy
with whatever i got
never asked for anything.
but i now ask
in your true love,
will i get to bask.
Ah! enough of dreams
let me put to rest,
false hopes of you n me.
I will be gone soon
far away from you
and wnt give past a look.
you do deserve more
some one you would love
and cherish a lot.
One last farewell i do
a last time, i say
"I love you"
:(
ReplyDeleteI have been in such a situation Prats where I was not able to tell him that I still love him...
Amazing yaa! :)
Loved it...
ahem made me feel.....
ReplyDelete@Artz : i know how it feels ... the story @ Ms R's blog was what followed this poem ... hope u can relate now.
ReplyDelete@Kumar : thx
ReplyDeleteLovely one.....I really enjoyed this.....This was more like the ones I do with the small Stanzas.....
ReplyDeleteAmazing one and also great picture selection...:)
u knw what.. aise he to i say that 'I LOVE YOU' :D :) keep churning like this..
ReplyDeletesomeone said she has probs being mushy....hehe...this is a contradiction ...lol...superb
ReplyDeletebtw prats...was thinking of starting a book review column with ye in TWL
@Poshin : thanks !! i just wrote it randomly and den did not feel like arranging it any way :)
ReplyDelete@Insi : thanksie dear !! u r just natural btw wen it comes to mushy writes !!
ReplyDelete@FL : is ds mushy ?? no re .. its real :) !! and my pleasure to do a book review on WL !! will soon talk about it :)
ReplyDeleteoye hoyeeeee!!!!! majja aa gaya! touching!
ReplyDeletethanksie Sunshine !!!
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