May 16, 2009

Hum Tum



Forever we will
Reach for the stars
Impossible for us .....to stay apart
Endless quests we will take and
Nothing to challenge our might....
Do or die together
Side by side


Forever we will
Overcome our sorrows
Rejoice in our joys.....and face whatever follows
Even beyond forever...we will be
Very much together
Even you know us mates...we are
Rose and Freelancer

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22 comments:

  1. Poshin_davidSaturday, May 16, 2009 7:48:00 PM

    Hey nice poem......

    Really lov the last 2 lines....

    wat really got my attention was the Garfield and Odie pic....(My favorite cartoon charecters.)........

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  2. SushmitaSaturday, May 16, 2009 7:49:00 PM

    omg!!
    m all so touched by it
    *wet eyes*
    thank you thank you...:)
    written beautifully..saying so much:)

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  3. AnonymousSaturday, May 16, 2009 7:50:00 PM

    aweeeeeeeee! :) cute cuter cutest!!

    loved the second stanza soo much..

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  4. FreelancerSaturday, May 16, 2009 7:52:00 PM

    @ chris
    thanx mate...was thinking of calvin n hobbes too...but didn't want to make rose a tiger...lol

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  5. FreelancerSaturday, May 16, 2009 7:53:00 PM

    @ rose...
    now be a sweet gal and wipe ur tears...lol....
    and thanx kis liye???

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  6. FreelancerSaturday, May 16, 2009 7:53:00 PM

    @ kaj...
    thanx gal

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  7. SPSaturday, May 16, 2009 7:58:00 PM

    beautiful FL..

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  8. FreelancerSaturday, May 16, 2009 7:59:00 PM

    @ rosh...
    thanx a ton lady

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  9. AnonymousSaturday, May 16, 2009 8:00:00 PM

    yaar ... this one won my heart !! mwah !! the poem is so heartfelt n lovely !! perfecto for the scribblers ;)

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  10. FreelancerSaturday, May 16, 2009 8:08:00 PM

    @ prats
    hehe....i know

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  11. FreelancerSaturday, May 16, 2009 8:08:00 PM

    @ prats
    hehe....i know

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  12. neeraj_onlySaturday, May 16, 2009 8:10:00 PM

    FL : Me senti man ....... did sketch cartoons for 2 of my friends this evening.....they left the college hostel today....all good things come to an end....we are left with state of denial


    Me big fan of garfild...nicee photu..and goodiee poem

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  13. SushmitaSaturday, May 16, 2009 8:14:00 PM

    I hv actually become a tube light today..just noticed its an acro..wow!!
    cool yaar:)

    n yeah prats..its perfect for the scribbles:)

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  14. Arun KumarSaturday, May 16, 2009 8:24:00 PM

    wonderful work man....
    me too didn't notice it was an acrostic...makes it even greater.....

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  15. FreelancerSaturday, May 16, 2009 8:25:00 PM

    @ neeraj
    tough luck mate...we just move on

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  16. FreelancerSaturday, May 16, 2009 8:26:00 PM

    @ arun...thanx buddy

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  17. AnonymousSaturday, May 16, 2009 9:09:00 PM

    Perfect delight for friendship.. N anythin which includes stars,moon,rain,sea, attracts me like hell..
    "Reaching for the stars"
    is my fav line!

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  18. NyxSaturday, May 16, 2009 9:09:00 PM

    A superb poem dude!! Cho CHuweet indeed :)

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  19. Zendagi MigzaraSaturday, May 16, 2009 10:08:00 PM

    Really sweet...

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  20. AnonymousSaturday, May 16, 2009 11:07:00 PM

    It's nice... Gonna read it again!

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  21. hasHAN hazaRIKASunday, May 17, 2009 9:21:00 AM

    Indeed a nice acrostic with beautiful words :)

    Cheers !!

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  22. FreelancerSunday, May 17, 2009 7:07:00 PM

    @ everyone...thanx mates

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