May 16, 2009

Hum Tum



Forever we will
Reach for the stars
Impossible for us .....to stay apart
Endless quests we will take and
Nothing to challenge our might....
Do or die together
Side by side


Forever we will
Overcome our sorrows
Rejoice in our joys.....and face whatever follows
Even beyond forever...we will be
Very much together
Even you know us mates...we are
Rose and Freelancer


22 comments:

  1. Hey nice poem......

    Really lov the last 2 lines....

    wat really got my attention was the Garfield and Odie pic....(My favorite cartoon charecters.)........

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  2. omg!!
    m all so touched by it
    *wet eyes*
    thank you thank you...:)
    written beautifully..saying so much:)

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  3. aweeeeeeeee! :) cute cuter cutest!!

    loved the second stanza soo much..

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  4. @ chris
    thanx mate...was thinking of calvin n hobbes too...but didn't want to make rose a tiger...lol

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  5. @ rose...
    now be a sweet gal and wipe ur tears...lol....
    and thanx kis liye???

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  6. yaar ... this one won my heart !! mwah !! the poem is so heartfelt n lovely !! perfecto for the scribblers ;)

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  7. FL : Me senti man ....... did sketch cartoons for 2 of my friends this evening.....they left the college hostel today....all good things come to an end....we are left with state of denial


    Me big fan of garfild...nicee photu..and goodiee poem

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  8. I hv actually become a tube light today..just noticed its an acro..wow!!
    cool yaar:)

    n yeah prats..its perfect for the scribbles:)

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  9. wonderful work man....
    me too didn't notice it was an acrostic...makes it even greater.....

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  10. @ neeraj
    tough luck mate...we just move on

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  11. Perfect delight for friendship.. N anythin which includes stars,moon,rain,sea, attracts me like hell..
    "Reaching for the stars"
    is my fav line!

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  12. A superb poem dude!! Cho CHuweet indeed :)

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  13. Indeed a nice acrostic with beautiful words :)

    Cheers !!

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