May 13, 2009

Counterfeit

Loveless nights
Turmoil inside
Alone amongst walls
Seeking your touch
Was it all fake?
Holding hands by the lake
Promises with the sun rise
Trust in those eyes
Was it all worth the stake?
The tears of loss
The guilty soul
The unknown goal
All gone with you
Into a distant world
The hands deceiving
Promises broken
Trust a mistake
Yes it was all fake!
Wasn’t worth the stake.


7 comments:

  1. Was it all fake?
    Holding hands by the lake**

    this was very beautiful.. the above to lines touched me...

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  3. have incorporated a lotta feelings into the words..... Good work Shwetha.... Was very much moved by the lines.....

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  4. Hi Swets,

    I relate to this post so much... Hurt takes on a different level everytime, isn't it?

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  5. "Trust a mistake"
    The only thing that can hurt a loving heart...very well written..m touched..

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  6. somethings are really not worth .. forget and move on !! lovely write btw..

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