April 12, 2009

Love Is Still Yours...


Reply to Mohita's poem! :)


Love was indeed around,
When I was at your side,
It has not gone off now,
No one can take away love,
Neither from you can it hide.

You did pay heed to words,
Yet sometimes feelings are more,
Hope one can see in a smile,
Love will be by your side all the while,
It is the pearl in your heart shore.

You say you saw not my eyes,
That had true admiration for you,
Dear, that spark it still is there,
It still looks for your presence with care,
It shall never stop that lookout too.

What is the need for fret, dear?
Tears why do you have to shed?
That love for you, is still in my heart,
That love, friendship, which was from the start,
It is still there, for the future ahead.

You say it could have all been yours,
Then I say it is still yours to take,
For nothing can take away the love,
It transcends all, it is highest above,
Friend, that love is still yours to take.

11 comments:

  1. God!!
    Trust me.I loved it.Each n' every word of it.
    I am so glad. Its a perfect,perfect,Perfect answer to my poem.It couldn't have been better.

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  2. Its simply amazing!

    Beautiful beyond comprehension,to say the least.

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  3. Oh so wonderful, Leo! As always! So da season of poetic replies has come again has it! :)

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  4. @mohita,
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    i stand corrected! thx! :) :)

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  5. @maverick,
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    nah mate, that depends on my sister..! she shd start too, then the season begins..!

    wats reply season, without the poetic princess! :)

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  6. ab main kya bolu ?? you amaze me each time !!

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  7. lovely!
    and yet the perfectly chosen words for adorable surge of thoughts that have kept the rhythm with beauty!
    and these lines are brilliantly written!

    You say it could have all been yours,
    Then I say it is still yours to take,
    For nothing can take away the love,
    It transcends all, it is highest above,
    Friend, that love is still yours to take.

    keep up!

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