April 15, 2009

Knights Of The Round Table

Pre-Script: My first ridiculous attempt at a diff poetry form. This is my try at a fib, a wonderful form introduced by Prats! :)

Knights
Sit
Around the
Famed round table
Honour, Valour, Courage, Strength,
Every quality displayed in abundance.
 

PS: Forgive me Prats...I knw its has to b according to the Syllable count...bt i guess i was too lazy so jst went wid da word count! srry! :(
        Attempted dis coz u asked me to, so dis one goes out to u! :)

12 comments:

  1. Good attempt... forget about the poetry style... the words were woven nicely ... I liked reading this poem :) Keep writing Gaurav!!

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  2. i agree with Tan... it was beautifully put.. :)

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  3. hmm..! :D

    word fib mav? new style with wonderful words! :)

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  4. m glad you wrote this !! this was so profound ... loved it .. thanks dear !!

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  5. nice try....

    keep it up..
    I ll try one soon....
    waiting for the classes to start...:P

    Prats!!! when are u gonna teach me this style...?? :O

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  6. @ Leo

    Yeah...kinda...unintentional though! Thanx fr da compliments! :)

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  7. @ Prats

    U tld me to, hw cld I jst ignore da decree of the queen of poetry! :P
    besides i said i wld, nd i dnt go back on my words! :)
    Am so glad dat u likd it!

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  8. @ The Vitruvian Boy

    Hey thnx mate! waiting to read ur attempt! :)

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  9. decent try maverick!
    :)
    god bless...!!
    keep blogging!

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