April 14, 2009

From eyes to soul

Have
you
tried to
search my eyes;
silently they gauge
into dark recess of your soul;
filtering the lies
facing a
mirror
of
me.


1-1-2-3-5-8-5-3-2-1-1 : Tried a fib and reverase fib together !!

14 comments:

  1. wow...gr8 poetry....

    I still dont know how to write poems.... :(

    but thanks for the inspiration...:)

    I ll try hard ... :)

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  2. @pratsie,
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    easy does it! :) some of us are trying to put together a single fib, and u already are combining? :P ;)

    that too beau-ti-fully! :)

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  3. dis one was beautiful! I mean da fib form and da combination was fabulous bt da poem itself da words were deep!
    luvd it! :)

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  4. Vitruvina boy .. u dnt have to try hard .. all u need is an inspiration !!

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  5. :) good job done again!
    this place is full of short scripted poets...
    a jonour that I have never explored much so love readin it all

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  6. Sometimes I wonder , if you were some Toru Dutt or someone in your past life.....

    Do you even 'TRY' to write all this, or it al just flows off your mind when you sit online !

    Duh!

    You've mastered it, ma'am !!

    ROCKS !!

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  7. Another piece of good work :))
    Loved it !!

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  8. @Leo .. jsut a sudden mood to write !! nothing more ;)

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  9. thanks so much Mav for the kind words !!

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  10. Hope we dnt bore u Pulkit ! :P


    @Ilashree : who's Toru Dutta ?? n wats ds ma'am ??? thanks fr the visit neway..

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  11. wowww!!!!!

    :D

    ur a genuis prats.... sheeer , master peice... ....ur an expert for sure

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  12. so glad Vitruvian boy !@!


    u say too much too good fr me Ste :)

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