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Vagueness of expression,
Vagueness of uniqueness,
Vagueness of the Vacuum,
And the Vacuum of existence.
My existence was a question,
My meanings were meaningless,
And I myself was lost,
Lost in myself, Lost in the Journey.
The Journey was snatching me away,
And I was finding myself more lost,
Lost in the struggle and the success,
Aghast and happy at every lesson,
Lesson of Life and the cry of the pain.
Pain was teaching me at every step,
Which the joys couldn’t teach,
The true faces and the true lies,
The True figments and the deceptive ways,
And taking me to paths I never saw.
Every lie seemed unfurled,
Every deception was unraveled,
The evilness was out in open,
I stood shattered and broken,
The tears was the only companions left,
I was the only companion of me,
But still I stood with thankfulness.
Thankful for the reality,
Thankful for the revelations,
And thankful for the deceptions,
Thankful for the cries,
Thankful for the sorrows,
And Thankful for the falseness,
I was Thankful for this and much more,
I was thankful for the vagueness and the Life,
And I was Thankful for the new ignited Me.
you write unique girl!!
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Vagueness of expression,
Vagueness of uniqueness,
Vagueness of the Vacuum,
And the Vacuum of existence.
Such a flawless arrangement words!!
stay blessed !!
truly agree with Uz... lovely poem with intellectual and thoughts, wonderfully put.. :)
ReplyDeleteinsightful poem
ReplyDeleteadversity precedes wisdom, enlightment and reveltion of the harsh truths in life
glad you relised it
Vagueness and we... thoughtfull..well expressed ;)
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ReplyDeleteThankful for the reality,
Thankful for the revelations,
And thankful for the deceptions,
Thankful for the cries,
Thankful for the sorrows,
And Thankful for the falseness,
I was Thankful for this and much more,
I was thankful for the vagueness and the Life,
And I was Thankful for the new ignited Me.
lovely.. :)
@ uz thanks so much .... i just write whatever my heart expresses to my head...i m glad it finds people who can comprehend it as well :-)
ReplyDelete@kajal i m honoured that u like it :-)
@Aparna ...ya the realization is a must to live ...glad u liked the insights :-)
@Kings thanks so much :-)
@Ani Thanks so much i m glad u liked it :-)
strong !!! loved this !!! really inspiring :)
ReplyDeletehey,Nabila.ur insight into life,vagueness and being lost,reminds me of osho's teachings.i loved the way u have written.keep writing this genre of poems for the lounge..
ReplyDelete@Prats ...thanks and i m glad if this could inspire neone :-)
ReplyDelete@crystal gal ....haven't listened to Osho but i know its quite philosophical n spiritual ...and all philosophical thinking r same.....and i will surely try to keep writing this genre as much i can :-)