March 17, 2009

Mistakes and mistakes


Mistakes and mistakes
That's what I seem to make
With just one step I take,
a thousand rules I break

My whole future is at stake
Innately miserable all night I stay awake
The tears I cry can imbue a lake
My smiles are all plastic and fake

Mistakes and mistakes
That's what I seem to make
With just one step I take,
a thousand rules I break
My attempt at monorhyme poetry style

9 comments:

  1. A nice try...very good...
    Could relate to it...
    :)

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  2. With just one step I take,
    a thousand rules I break <---- Nice lines you got there!

    Thanks for sharing

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  3. one more para and i can sing it !! too nicely penned dear :)

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  4. a rhyming write.. perfect monorhyme, well meant and true, mistakes goes on :)

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  5. A beautiful monorhyme aptly describing the emotional turmoil one goes through on introspection! luvd it, Aparna! :)

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  6. lovely lines aparna..

    to err is human though.. :D

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