March 17, 2009

Mistakes and mistakes


Mistakes and mistakes
That's what I seem to make
With just one step I take,
a thousand rules I break

My whole future is at stake
Innately miserable all night I stay awake
The tears I cry can imbue a lake
My smiles are all plastic and fake

Mistakes and mistakes
That's what I seem to make
With just one step I take,
a thousand rules I break
My attempt at monorhyme poetry style
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9 comments:

  1. nanTuesday, March 17, 2009 5:30:00 PM

    It is human to make mistakes :P

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  2. NyxTuesday, March 17, 2009 5:55:00 PM

    A nice try...very good...
    Could relate to it...
    :)

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  3. RagpickerTuesday, March 17, 2009 7:16:00 PM

    With just one step I take,
    a thousand rules I break <---- Nice lines you got there!

    Thanks for sharing

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  4. AnonymousTuesday, March 17, 2009 7:24:00 PM

    one more para and i can sing it !! too nicely penned dear :)

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  5. Kings ChaosTuesday, March 17, 2009 8:06:00 PM

    a rhyming write.. perfect monorhyme, well meant and true, mistakes goes on :)

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  6. MaverickTuesday, March 17, 2009 8:26:00 PM

    A beautiful monorhyme aptly describing the emotional turmoil one goes through on introspection! luvd it, Aparna! :)

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  7. Mohita SaxenaTuesday, March 17, 2009 8:42:00 PM

    Bravo!

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  8. AnonymousTuesday, March 17, 2009 10:15:00 PM

    loved it... :)
    beautifully carried n monorhyme

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  9. AnonymousThursday, March 19, 2009 8:33:00 PM

    lovely lines aparna..

    to err is human though.. :D

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