This feeling inside me grows,
Hunt for reasons, I do
Eventually giving up.
Heart has no reason,
Enticing each in its ways
Attracting those least suspecting
Reasons none for any of its actions, I
Try to make myself understand.
Hunting and searching to no
Avail. I now know.
Sanity leaving me, hopelessly.
I wonder, if I'll ever be the same
The one to be cautious and
Smart, is now careless in love.
Roaming aimlessly,
Expecting someone, maybe?
Await the hint of their arrival.
Senselessly.
Only the ones in love will
Never question my feelings. Rest
Suspect insanity.
Organise my thoughts I try to
Fighting fleeting thoughts of you
What do I feel, I try to grasp
Horribly failing
I just smile without reason
Could this be love, I wonder
Heart misses a beat at the very thought
Reasons I try to give, why
Each time I think of you
A flush in my cheeks
Smile on lips
Obstruct my thinking. I fail.
Nonetheless, I try.
Knowing not what to do.
Never ever have feelings been so
Obnoxiously strong.
Wonder if you feel the
Same as I do.
Now, I do know that you
Occupy a place in my heart
That which I can never explain
Heart works in mysterious ways
I can never hope to understand
Never will I justify what I feel. I guess it
Goes without saying that I think I love you.
For me this post is about the craziness and confusion that love brings. (ie the Zsa Zsa Zsu :P) This one video is my absolute favorite and is passion personified...
me first! officially too!
ReplyDeletei loved ur acrostic, it was brilliant. just like u!
heart indeed has its reasons!
oh my god! acrostic and this flow! maan gaye ustaad :)
ReplyDeletenice write rash. a very meaningfull and heartfelt acrostic :)
ReplyDeleteoh..i didnt notice ki acrostic hai...it was soo gud...d feelings..d flow...wow!
ReplyDeleteI too just realised that it was acrostic...
ReplyDeleteI feel this style of poetry asks for a lot of creativity... Wonder how u ppl write so beautifully....
Very nice Rashi..!!
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Such long acrostic !!! such lovely one that too !! the last lines are just awesome !! too sweet !! heart has really mysterious ways !!! and yours are magical ;)
ReplyDeleteHmmmm .... a very nice poem ... as I felt when I read it before you posted here .... but then, I think there were a few changes ... because I read it once more now and felt this is even better!!!
ReplyDeleteThe title is a thing of concern, but then you dont want us to read it as acrostic! Then, its fine :)
tht was lovely.. n the flow was great.. :)
ReplyDeleteProfound craziness :P
ReplyDeleteNice one rashi
Brilliant Acrostic! A masterpiece that somehow is a metaphor to ur style! wonderful read this one! :)
ReplyDeletewow... rashi.. u left me spellbound... such a lovely poem... and that too acrostic... damn good.. hats off to u!!!
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