March 2, 2009

Haiku

h God..Oh God ..Oh God..this Haiku fever is gripping me in too...Inspired by Ani and Rashi..here goes my first try. Sorry to mess up WL with this being my first official original Post for WL..lol..hope you guys enjoy it...All types of criticism accepted with full heart. :)



Moving round in circle
Winter, summer, rain, autumn
Nature on its class...
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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousTuesday, March 03, 2009 1:04:00 AM

    WoW !!!!!!!
    kudos !!

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  2. AnonymousTuesday, March 03, 2009 1:53:00 AM

    1st attempt! Wah!

    See, I can inspire too :D

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  3. AnonymousTuesday, March 03, 2009 10:15:00 AM

    thaks pretty and rashi...:)

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  4. Sandeep BalanTuesday, March 03, 2009 10:55:00 AM

    that was pretty neat gul....1st official post..he he...welcome to the family

    ;-)

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  5. nanTuesday, March 03, 2009 2:15:00 PM

    classy :)

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  6. Kings ChaosTuesday, March 03, 2009 2:34:00 PM

    That was a superb first post dear.. nice one :)

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  7. AnonymousTuesday, March 03, 2009 6:31:00 PM

    waaah gulshan..bahut khoob :)

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  8. AnonymousTuesday, March 03, 2009 6:45:00 PM

    blush blush...ab to mujhe sharam aa rahi hai .:P
    thanks 4 encouragement guys..

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  9. AnilaTuesday, March 03, 2009 6:56:00 PM

    ooo yaaayy that was lovelyy.. :)

    yaaayyyyy 1st official entry to WL .. welcome to this big family :)

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  10. ArjunTuesday, March 03, 2009 7:54:00 PM

    wow..!!
    That was nice... :)

    Welcome to WL.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  11. Mohita SaxenaTuesday, March 03, 2009 10:34:00 PM

    I loved it!!
    Simple in words,yet profound in meaning.
    That's the magic of ur poem..
    A brilliant start..
    Way to go,friend.

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  12. AnonymousTuesday, March 03, 2009 10:34:00 PM

    yeah welcome to the family *confetti* :D

    first was too good, we should expect miracles from you too, no?

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  13. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 2:50:00 PM

    yep... kudos! :)

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