March 2, 2009

Haiku

h God..Oh God ..Oh God..this Haiku fever is gripping me in too...Inspired by Ani and Rashi..here goes my first try. Sorry to mess up WL with this being my first official original Post for WL..lol..hope you guys enjoy it...All types of criticism accepted with full heart. :)



Moving round in circle
Winter, summer, rain, autumn
Nature on its class...

13 comments:

  1. 1st attempt! Wah!

    See, I can inspire too :D

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  2. that was pretty neat gul....1st official post..he he...welcome to the family

    ;-)

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  3. That was a superb first post dear.. nice one :)

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  4. blush blush...ab to mujhe sharam aa rahi hai .:P
    thanks 4 encouragement guys..

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  5. ooo yaaayy that was lovelyy.. :)

    yaaayyyyy 1st official entry to WL .. welcome to this big family :)

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  6. wow..!!
    That was nice... :)

    Welcome to WL.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  7. I loved it!!
    Simple in words,yet profound in meaning.
    That's the magic of ur poem..
    A brilliant start..
    Way to go,friend.

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  8. yeah welcome to the family *confetti* :D

    first was too good, we should expect miracles from you too, no?

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