Wait for it to rain.
I do, all day, then it does
On my dreams, slowly steadily.
I can still feel him,
Everywhere, I still try to find
Him frozen in ice.
Bride in white, I was
Not meant to be. He rode away into
the sunset, one rainy day.
I love you, Prats! I'm serious, I had so much fun doing this! Thanks a lot!
raash... u amaze me every time !!! if u were as real student of my class, u would top it every time !! :D
ReplyDeletethe second was too good !!
ps : read the useful hints to improvise ur art of haiku writing :)
ReplyDeletepps : check my haiku posted last night..
Hail Rashi and prats di :P
ReplyDeleteRash, you did it again.. simply too good. just like prats had said ;)
ReplyDeleteThird one is good but the second is the best of three, i suppose.. way to go :)
wow! kudos Rash :)
ReplyDeleteawww that was lovellyyyyy.. :)
ReplyDeletewell done.. :)
the 2nd one..the 2nd one....awwwwww m loving t
ReplyDeletealthough I loved the first one, so amazingly chilly, so sadly true and the third one!
ReplyDeletesecond was fine too, or may be i missed the magic in it ? tell me?
raash, u r a genius..! :)
ReplyDeletea poem of 3 haikus? :O speecheless!