My wonderless tread,
o'er numbers shrew on beach of life
torn wounded feet!
Not exactly my first Haiku, I got to know about it many years ago, and refreshed when prats made a haiku of my post about Rain. But before I didn't have even the slightest idea of syllabus, Thank you Prats.
Now coming to the piece. I am an accountant to be and it is 'posed to mean that I have figures ubiquitously litterling the coast of my life!
too apt for an accountant to be ;)
ReplyDeleteBut a little bit pessimist don't you see... cmon thats your profession, cheer up ;) , lotsa numbers to crunch and lotsa numbers to punch...hehehehe...
Reading your poetic view of an accountants journey... i could think of nothing but Robert frost's poem.. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
Voila those are my fave lines king...
ReplyDeleteand ya mr. accountant to be..i think i can relate to your post..may be because we share the same fate ..:P :P
U see i can feel it...
Asbah, you captured the moment so well.. brings in so many emotions..
ReplyDeleteloved it!!
thankyou King, I agree, Wrote it today at office when i was piled up with work or something like that.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines by Frost!
Gulshan, Thankyou :)
and a *lil* correction :P lets say it is MISS accountant, how apt is that ? :P
Kaj, *smiles* :)
ReplyDeleteoops..ya sure..i was confused actually...so thought ll make it with Mr....:P...anyways nice to know..no male domination on WL :P....
ReplyDeleteLOL. we need a super woman to make it confirmed. But then, we've a lot of super women here, all girls are super women ;)
ReplyDeletewow... we got lots of accountants in here... and male domination !!!! cmon ppl, tht could be another much debated topic... off lately i can see too much posts about mush and love lorn feelings... ;) ... what do u say about that....
ReplyDelete*smiling*
ReplyDelete*still smiling*
*happy*
*more happy*
:)
it was really a worthy read .. i will check the count later ..
King this wasnt mush and love, hayna?
ReplyDeletepratss... wow wow guess who's saying so ... *falls off the chair and faints*
*fanning*
ReplyDeletewake up.....
u have to write more haikus :P
of course of course :D
ReplyDelete*wakes up*
ha ha :D
ReplyDeletewow! asbah this one was even better!
ReplyDeletei felt it written for me so i am self dedicating it without permission! ;) hope u wont mind
lol of course not, *declares that it is dedicated to Insi and Gulshan*
ReplyDeleteHaiku fever at the Lounge :P
ReplyDeletenan z the only one who hasnt posted one i guess ;) :D
good good..!!
ReplyDeleteCheers..!!
Arjun
accountant to be? :O
ReplyDeletenah, u r a authoress to be i feel! u write divinely asbah! :)
oooo nice one :)
ReplyDeletedivine? Who says it??
ReplyDeletevin?
*faints*