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The tree shed another leaf,
a dry golden slender fellow,
while the green ones mocked..
The old lady picked it carefully
her wrinkled hands caressing
the tender veins of the leaf..
Her rough yet tender arm lifted
the leaf to air as it eclipsed
the sunlight blinding her eyes..
The leaf moved a bit inwards,
the lady gave her toothless grin,
and thus the two bonded to each other..
like two matured fellows view other,
respecting for the brave face they keep
as the walk into another sunset...
WONDERFUL di
ReplyDeleteOne of ur bests!
*Heartfelt*
Very well written Prats...
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*PEACE*
nice one prats
ReplyDeletewow prats... such deep thoughts.. !!simply loved the co-relation and the comparison... awesome work.. really loved it... keep it up!!!
ReplyDeletePrats! U never fail to impress me! The array of subjects for ur poems leaves me mesmerized! This one's no exception! And the beautiful way in which you dealt with such an emotional topic left me spellbound! wonderful! :)
ReplyDeleteAn old woman and an autumn leaf... breathtakingly beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAs I've said, u never cease to surprise me!
:)
Nice one.. and nice companionship between the two..
ReplyDeleteyou took my breath away!
ReplyDeletewonderful Prats..!!
ReplyDeleteWhere , how , when do u get such nice sweet thoughts....??
Such a joy to read ur poems....
I maynot express it tat well.. but i truly enjoy reading urs..!! :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Wow.. It is really very sweet :) Keep em comin' Prats, I really really love your work!
ReplyDeletethanks nan !! but as i say always, best is not yet written :)
ReplyDeleteThanku Artz & Aparna !
ReplyDeletethanks mona .. i too loved the thought.. but i guess i could polish it too !
ReplyDeleteMav.. ur morning message was more special that any comment !
ReplyDeletewoww....prats....nt among ur best.....but its really good i liked it
ReplyDeleteI meant it Prats! :)
ReplyDeletem glad you liked it neha ..
ReplyDelete@karmasura.. it was just a try ..
@desi : :O !!
ReplyDelete@asbah : :)
Amazing theme.
ReplyDeleteFrom where do you dig out such unconventional notions.?!!
I have been awestruck as always.
now this is what i call magic.. in its full form.. innovative and creative thinking at one of its best!!
ReplyDeleteyou express the joy toooooooooo well ;)
ReplyDeleteThankuuu !
@Ashrita .. love your comemtns dearie :)
ReplyDeletethanks Ste .. I agree this is not my best :)
ReplyDelete@Mohita .. i write all this to see your wonderful comments :D
ReplyDeletethankuuu Kajal !!!!
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