March 8, 2009

Cursed



The golden touch,
i once possessed..
fame and money
to me it fetched..
soon greed reigned
and purity was gone
the golden hand
no longer shone..
was it devil's curse
or my own evil
that took me on
path to perils..

19 comments:

  1. Well said prats, meaningfull,heartfelt and beautifull rhyming of words :)

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  2. his/her sinister and prehensile deeds definitely are proving to be perilous

    he should realise that greediness will turn boons to curses.


    wel handled

    eye opening

    thought provoking

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  3. That was fast replies ... Thanks Kings for the read :)

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  4. @Aparna .. thanks dearie ... i hope we all realize this and avoid going on the path of perils :)

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  5. Very Well conceptualized..

    Thought Provoking..

    Indeed greediness would turn things upside down..

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  6. brought so many thoughts to mind Prats.. and I liked the picture too.. :)

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  7. hnnmm makes one think of what they are doing.. nice.. :)

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  8. Ah! this is poetry :)
    Prats di at her best :)

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  9. Oh..!! Too good..!!

    Greediness ... yeah.... never a good virtue... :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  10. Thanks charzz .. this was just an instant thought :)

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  11. Best never comes Nan !! it should just get better !

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  12. very nice prats..liked it a lot...

    late but i m here! :P

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