February 5, 2009

Sapne

ek boond sapno ki..
rang bhare sapne..
chamkeele sapne..

meri aankhein..
ret ka samandar..
pyasa tapta ret..

seep sa dil..
sapne sanjota..
moti ki chaah me..

meri chamak..
sab dekhenge..
aaj nahi to kal..


my try at hindi poetry first time....

10 comments:

  1. Wonderful thought, Prats! Luvd it! With your permission, I wld just wanna bring to ur notice a small correction. Its "pyaasi tapti ret"!
    Sand or "ret" is feminine in gender in Hindi! :)

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  2. Oh thanks Maverick .. as i said, its the first time i tried hindi poetry ...

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  3. Prats such deep emotions expressed and that too its your first try.. Nothing can stop you now....
    you were born with a flair for words.. *luv*

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  4. hey Pink .. so sweet of you to give me encouragement .. thanks dear .. :) luv ya !

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  5. superhero ban na mera bhi sapna thaa...tumhaari kavita padke mujhe apne sapne yaad aa gaye...tumne ek superhero ko rulaa diya....Thank u pratsie...thank u...mere upar bhi ek acchi si kavita likhiye naa..bada upkaar hoga...

    Hail StepCOCK...Superheroes ka Baap! With great power comes great responsibilities...n some side effects too ;-)

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  6. bahut badhia
    acchi koshish
    hai ek galati hai vo maverick ne bata hi di hai
    ho sake to hindi fonts me hi likho hindi poems.

    seep sa dil..
    sapne sanjota..
    moti ki chaah me..

    meri chamak..
    sab dekhenge..
    aaj nahi to kal..


    i like this lines most

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  7. oh oh .. my honour stepCOCK to write smthign on u .. let me know u a bit more ;)

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  8. you will...you will...i have shared my life story with sandeep, asbah n priyanka...they will bring it to you all....the saga begins from 23:45 today...i belong to your lounge...aapka apna superhero...coz i am stepcock:Superheroes ka Baap!

    With great powers come great responsibilities...n side effects too...

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  9. m glad you liked my lines Chirag :) i will try writing more...

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