You don't have
time and words for me
but you have the courage
to say,"don't miss me please"...
What is the feeling
that you hide so pretty well
is it your affectionate cares
or your sheer indifference...
You feel my pain like yours
and you pray for joys to be mine
tell me dear,do you really not know,
my smile's bound with your presence in my life...
Inspired from Illusion's poem "Slow poison" ...
What is the feeling
ReplyDeletethat you hide so pretty well
is it your affectionate cares
or your sheer indifference...
---- early morning sadness Prats.... sighs.. :(
This was schedules to be 8pm but by mistake it got posted in morning .. i wrote it instantly as an afterthought to illusion's poem...
ReplyDeletemy smile's bound with your presence in my life...
ReplyDeletegood one prats....second blogger singh...left me with a tinge of sadness right at the start of the day...;-)
lovely poem prats! :)
ReplyDeleteearly morning sadness?
lovely prats... d last line ws d best...says everything actually!
ReplyDeleten as i always tell u... ur poems r so much like 'me' :)
i know .. this was not supposed to be sad but somehow it leaves with a sad feeling ...
ReplyDeletesame as i feel for some one ...
thanks Sandeep and Leo ... appreciate ur read :)
ReplyDeleteAHH! *thumbs up* but its even saadder then Slow poison and its far more better then it!
ReplyDeleteHatss off to you pratz!
I understand what you mean Priyanka .. same is here too with your poems ...
ReplyDeleteWonderful one, Prats! :)
ReplyDelete* sigh *
ReplyDeleteThe last line... I have nothing else to say... I <3 the last line!
inspiration never stops..i guess... lovingly sad, i did say...nice and simple :)
ReplyDeleteM glad you liked it Illusion ... more coz your write was the inspiration behind it :)
ReplyDeletethanku Maverick !
ReplyDeleteRaash ,,, i just knew you will love the last lines .. coz i loved it too :)
ReplyDeleteright said Kings abt the inspiration .. :)
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