Chahae rishton ki hararat hu
Ya dukh ki dhoob jala daley
mere dil ki khali nagri ko
Kuch aur adhura ker daley
Her mausam mera apna hai
Mere ankhon ko pur num kare
Ya rooh ko pyasa ker daley
mere sab jugnu ura de
Ya mere sang andhera ker daley
Her mausam mera apna hai
Munjhe yadon ki saughat jo dae
Ya man ko khali ke daley
Mere jeevan ki her daali ko
Her sukh se aari ker daley
Her mausam mera apna hai
Mujhe lafzon ko zuban de
Ya mere qalam ko aajiz ker daley
mujhe khud main tankha ker de
Ya mere sang mahafil ker daley
Her mausam mera Apna hai
its so nice urza...really sweet n lovely!! :)
ReplyDeletethank you priya..
ReplyDeleteyour words of appreciation worth a sweet hug!!
its gud
ReplyDeletebt some words are not clear
i mean ya to spelling galat hai ya me nahi janta meaning un words ke
like....hararat,dhoob,dhoob,dhoob, i think this are words iam not able to understand plzz explain the meaning of this words
other than that some lines are not able to describe the feeling of this poem.
thankyou chiragh for pointing out the words ...
ReplyDeletewel, hararat means the warmth
warmth of relationships..
of emotions that are bestowed for relations
and
dhoob( or dhoop) in apparent meaning is the sunrays, sunlight...
and in poem its used as an intensity of miseries and woes that cause a burn to a human soul .
what else!!
stay blessed!
thanks a lot
ReplyDeletesome more words i left in the above comment
are
aari,aajiz
UZ
ReplyDeletewhere r u ghayab gal?
the poem.. its awesum.. the feel was pure and close to my heart
aaari means "deprive of"
ReplyDeletedeprive me of all the blisses
and aajiz is "reliant ","dependent" unable to do anything without others' help"
make my pen reliant to others words..
hope it would help [:)]
Cheers!
Thanks illusion!
ReplyDeleteI is up with preperation of papers and with assignments..
need tons of prayers ..
will come back on 7th feb inshaAllah!*hugs*
YA IT HELPS ME
ReplyDeleteTHANKS A LOT
best of luck - love - wishes - prayers!
ReplyDelete*sigh*
You spoke my heart, as you always do!
@chirag..
ReplyDeletenever mention,it's my pleasure that you give my piece a thought..
And Asbah!!
we always write about "Us" .be it a poem , a comic or a thought !!
Stay blessed
keep praying as i feel blessed when you pray for me!
uz... you write beautiful poems.. this is one of your excellent works.. loved it!
ReplyDeletelovely poem..
ReplyDeleteTy pink! your words are a real gem for me .. BELIEVE ME! *love*
ReplyDeletethanks anie!
jeeti rahaye!