HE told what he would never do, just to create hatred for himself in her and he succeeded. Her love for him could only hear his words but could not see the letter from the Embassy hidden in his back pocket. She slapped him, cried and ran away out of his sight; as he wished!
I like your twist more! really!
ReplyDeleteand wow at her, slapping and then going, and sad for him!
as the distances between us grew!
really loved this !!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pratibha ...
ReplyDeleteAsbah, twists are what Life has given me - too much too late, of course ... But I like this way - live the way it comes to me and with every twists in life, I learn a gallon of it (Dont ask me why its gallon and not Kilo or Bagful!)
Cheers!
interesting twist..
ReplyDeleteso who planning to continue next.. or is the end.. :)
Hey, its all yours Ani ... go ahead! We will love to hear from you too ... but remember, 3 lines!!!
ReplyDeletehnnm will give it a shot.. but no promises.. considering its 3 lines.. hehe am very bad with stories yaar..
ReplyDeletebut definitly will wanna give a shot.. so yeh.. lets see.. :)
And a nice sequel to prats di's write Tan ;)
ReplyDeletewow! tan.. so much of talent! loved the twist.. :)
ReplyDelete@ Ani
ReplyDeleteDo try to write something now ... want to see you writing and posting here too ...
@ Nan and Kajal
ReplyDeleteThanks for liking this ... three lines were too short ... but I loved it!!
I'm a bit sad to see that not many has tried their hands on this ... it would be a good fun if tried ... seriously!!