I seem to get inspired by poems in the lounge... I felt sad when I saw Pink Orchid's poem here . This is what I replying to her. Hope you likes it Orchid!
I don't know who told you,
That you're a "no-one" to me,
I may be a stranger now,
But yet you I want to see.
I know not who I am either,
I ask myself that every day,
Yet when I'm with you, friend,
I feel I know me in a better way.
I'm there now, if not before,
I don't know if I'll be there again,
I just want to make you laugh,
I'll go away if I am giving you pain.
I can look into your eyes, friend,
Yet sometimes I do need to blink,
I may not be there all of the time,
But I am avoiding you don't think.
You need not think of it always,
Let us your angels, help you get peace,
Stop thinking you are a no-one,
Just know you're someone to us please.
We won't let you go to oblivion,
You are part of us now today,
If you are a cloud, soaring in the sky,
We are the birds, that with you play.
So when you feel you are no-one,
Anytime you can come to our side,
You are someone to us, always,
In us, your pain you can confide.
wow !!! thanks for writing this .. you answere one of my doubt abt friendship :)
ReplyDeleteThese lines were beautiful and had the perfect rythm...
ReplyDeleteSo when you feel you are no-one,
Anytime you can come to our side,
You are someone to us, always,
In us, your pain you can confide
u all inspire me...that's it..!!..i'll rack my brains today and come up with a poem of my own :)
That is so beautiful Leo, very nicely presented.
ReplyDeleteA very good answer..
Cheers
*PEACE*
That's beautiful leo....
ReplyDeleteDon't know why ..that reminded of ghajini lol... :P
especially the second para...Memory loss :D
Now you will get a lot of fraandship requests on orkut!
ReplyDeleteMore than yr poem, I liked what you said in the comments section of Pinks: I hate seeing my friends sad :)
But the poem..Loved it! Seems like you and Pink have a jugalbandi! Lets see what it conjures up!
This was nice Leo... Brought smiles.. :) I too shall send a fraandship request now.. hehe ;)
ReplyDelete"I know not who I am either,
I ask myself that every day,
Yet when I'm with you, friend,
I feel I know me in a better way."
I kind of related that with my case n felt it so amazingly true...
Cheers..!!
Arjun
my pleasure prats! :)
ReplyDeletethanks aparna... looking fwd to ur poem...! :)
ReplyDeletethanks aarthi...
ReplyDeleteheheh... thanks anurag! :)
ReplyDeleteno problem rashi! :)
ReplyDeletethanks for liking! :)
and we'll consider abt the jugalbandhi! :)
arjun... thanks man! :)
ReplyDelete@Leo: i never thought this would be the result of "who are you? a no-one"
ReplyDeletei am glad that I know you Vinay..and I still say that you have a heart of gold- your words are a proof of that.
@Rashi V : I wont call it a jugalbandhi :) all I'd say is at times Vinay comes up with these beautiful answers for my questions.. and I feel so much better after getting those answers.. :)
ReplyDeleteleo...u have to stop giving replies....man...awsome...wonderful may god bless every human bng with a frnd like u....the life wld nvr b a chaos then...luv u fr this...gr8 as always my poet king( i gave u the new title yesterday :P)
ReplyDeletethank you kajal...! :)
ReplyDeleteyou have a heart of gold too..! :)
am glad i make u feel better too! :)
ReplyDeletetweety, i wish i could resist the temptation... but i cant...! :)
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