January 15, 2009

Who Are You?

I seem to get inspired by poems in the lounge... I felt sad when I saw Pink Orchid's poem here . This is what I replying to her. Hope you likes it Orchid!

I don't know who told you,
That you're a "no-one" to me,
I may be a stranger now,
But yet you I want to see.

I know not who I am either,
I ask myself that every day,
Yet when I'm with you, friend,
I feel I know me in a better way.

I'm there now, if not before,
I don't know if I'll be there again,
I just want to make you laugh,
I'll go away if I am giving you pain.

I can look into your eyes, friend,
Yet sometimes I do need to blink,
I may not be there all of the time,
But I am avoiding you don't think.

You need not think of it always,
Let us your angels, help you get peace,
Stop thinking you are a no-one,
Just know you're someone to us please.

We won't let you go to oblivion,
You are part of us now today,
If you are a cloud, soaring in the sky,
We are the birds, that with you play.

So when you feel you are no-one,
Anytime you can come to our side,
You are someone to us, always,
In us, your pain you can confide.

18 comments:

  1. wow !!! thanks for writing this .. you answere one of my doubt abt friendship :)

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  2. These lines were beautiful and had the perfect rythm...

    So when you feel you are no-one,

    Anytime you can come to our side,

    You are someone to us, always,

    In us, your pain you can confide


    u all inspire me...that's it..!!..i'll rack my brains today and come up with a poem of my own :)

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  3. That is so beautiful Leo, very nicely presented.

    A very good answer..

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  4. That's beautiful leo....

    Don't know why ..that reminded of ghajini lol... :P
    especially the second para...Memory loss :D

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  5. Now you will get a lot of fraandship requests on orkut!

    More than yr poem, I liked what you said in the comments section of Pinks: I hate seeing my friends sad :)

    But the poem..Loved it! Seems like you and Pink have a jugalbandi! Lets see what it conjures up!

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  6. This was nice Leo... Brought smiles.. :) I too shall send a fraandship request now.. hehe ;)

    "I know not who I am either,
    I ask myself that every day,
    Yet when I'm with you, friend,
    I feel I know me in a better way."

    I kind of related that with my case n felt it so amazingly true...

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  7. thanks aparna... looking fwd to ur poem...! :)

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  8. no problem rashi! :)

    thanks for liking! :)

    and we'll consider abt the jugalbandhi! :)

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  9. @Leo: i never thought this would be the result of "who are you? a no-one"
    i am glad that I know you Vinay..and I still say that you have a heart of gold- your words are a proof of that.

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  10. @Rashi V : I wont call it a jugalbandhi :) all I'd say is at times Vinay comes up with these beautiful answers for my questions.. and I feel so much better after getting those answers.. :)

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  11. leo...u have to stop giving replies....man...awsome...wonderful may god bless every human bng with a frnd like u....the life wld nvr b a chaos then...luv u fr this...gr8 as always my poet king( i gave u the new title yesterday :P)

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  12. thank you kajal...! :)

    you have a heart of gold too..! :)

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  13. am glad i make u feel better too! :)

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  14. tweety, i wish i could resist the temptation... but i cant...! :)

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