Looked deep down to find the silent waters
There came all the memories to her recall
Back came the days of those slaughters
She was being forced by her father to get drowned
And she did not want to suicide
But what else could the man has done
It was a matter of the man’s pride
For she was being left alone by the family
And they were going too far
Her little brother was mourning too
How that innocent would know it was a war
When India and Pakistan were made apart
Families faced condition so miserable
All came to kill each other
Be it Hindus, be it Muslims
The girls had to die
For they had no other choice
She didn’t want to suicide
But did she have any voice?
The young girl suddenly got down and ran
To find a place to hide
Her brother calling her not to go
He was also crushed in the tide
All of them gone, no Hindu left
Her family also disappeared
And there came some Muslims
They saw her shivering with fear
There was a good one among them
Who saved her and married
And she was forced to get converted
Quran in her closet since, she always carried
And there comes the day again
She is standing on the same wall
For the previous time it was her father
This time it was son’s call
The merciful day came when she saw her brother again
But they were no more her family
Now she was Hindu no more
She now has a son who listens to her barely
He calls himself a “Jehadi” now
And hates the so called blasphemous
He also became doubtful of her
Asked “whether you are still one of us”
What could have she replied
She, herself didn’t know
Molded herself to time
But it was her time to go
She stood on the wall of the well
And looked deep down to find the silent waters
There came all the memories to her recall
Back came the days of those slaughters
This time she made up her mind
She had come here after all the prayers
Be it Quran, be it Jap Sahib
She read it all with taught flairs
This time she came prepared
She could not have taken any more
And “splash” she went down
‘Coz she was broken from the core
The only doubt she had in mind
Before this quirk …
Which place will she be going?
The Muslims’ Jannat or Hindus’ Swarg!
(Inspired By a Pakistani Movie: Khamosh Pani, The Silent Waters)
P.S.: If you get a chance don't miss this movie..you will get another perspective of how the females are treated in this part of the world...they are always forced to adopt what thier parents, husbands and sons choose for them. It was a heart melting time when I wrote this since my Grandparents have been through all this during the partition. My Grand mother had to stay inside a heap of agricultural waste with a child of 3 years for more than a week to get out with safely. She was pregnant that time.
Crossposted @ my personal blog
thanks for telling of this movie .. will surely watch it sm day !! n nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteHave put that movie on the list of things to do when exams get done..
ReplyDeleteBut i have realised.. We are so oblivious to what happens on the other side of the border. Though we are so close. We are technically the same but yet so different. I could never be able to relate to their ways. I wonder what she would have gone through to become a Muslim in a foreign land. Knowing that your parents are dead. I know it killed her (literally) to have her son ask her, her identity. Whatever be it. He was a part of her identity. He came in from there. Whatever she was, he was it too! Cruel ways of life!
Gr8 work! I bowled over!
@pretty..ooh yes its a nice movie...you would surely love it..the only problem is that it is in punjabi!!
ReplyDelete@RV..i agree with you..the only thing that hurt her the most was the words of her son...they pierced through her heart which led to the sad demise
ReplyDeletegood work
ReplyDeletewelcome at lounge
It's a pity really...!!
ReplyDeleteWill try to find the movie n watch it .... U've done a neat job with the narration... :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Great Narration there must say...Love the flow....
ReplyDeletei could imagine the entire thing.. wonderful work nav :)
ReplyDeletehey naveen too long i must say, got lost in between :), but it was neatly done in the end, well will surely watch the movie
ReplyDeletethanks chirag, arjun, anurag and pink orchid for your lovely comments..you will surely love the movie
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@jack..i also realized that its long only after i made it...but then i thought this is a kinda narration of the whole story..if i edit or omit, the juice would be take out from the fruit...let's have water melon this time instead of lemons!!!
ReplyDeletegood words! imaginative... could feel it...
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