In my prayers that are confined
in the rythms of my heart
burgeoned in my soul
i beg for thy love
i plead for your mercy
For YOU, Al-Raheem,
The most merciful
are powers
beyond limits
beyond boundaries
You,The Blesser,The Knowing
Percieve The Imperceptable
endows the viser
you, Al-Hayyi,The living
are my soul escorter
with serenity & love
and I, mesmerized byThe beauty,
His creations hold
bow down to the supreme
He is worthy to worship
and He alone,
deserve the adulation
of Pure & peace
of heart and soul
Now now
ReplyDeletethis is class stuff
so captivating !
Kudos
really nice..touching!
ReplyDeleteliked it!
did i talk to u ovr chat? urza?
thank you nan and priyanka!
ReplyDeletewel yeah you did!
was using asbah's account :)
this one just stands out...the creator...the supreme...i liked the way you dealt with such a tough subject to write a poem on..and you did it so effortlessly...cakewalk!! one of the best ones here at the lounge! every word...every line packs a punch....too good urza!!
ReplyDeleteone word... prayerfull .
ReplyDeletehumbling indeed :)
A poem about the almighty.. I dont even consider myself capable of commenting on it.. it was a tough call but as sandeep said it really was a "cakewalk" for you..
ReplyDeletewaoh ...haven't seen a poem in such a style ....this one's so different .....
ReplyDeleteU could hv added a pic actually and the word count .....Coz this poem stands out honestly ...for the power of the words used .....
Kudos :)
hmm i think i am going to add a picture and a word count for this one.. but before that i have to do my driver's duty.. will be back and do so..
ReplyDeletethank you sandeep!
ReplyDeletea combination of words ,sometimes becomes blessings.and i feel blessed .
no one can praise HIM ,The Almighty with words like grain in desert .stay blessed pink and king!
@ anurag
dont know how to add a picture. plus read the rules after i posted them..
thank you for such appreciationg words!