They say
Standing high
Amid the surge of heads
Make you all eminent
All adored
I say, touching zeniths
Of esteem and reverence
Amid the surge of successes
Make you all solitaire
Leave you to inspire
All “others”
Who anon swap you
Of the floor
Of the screen
And of the world
Carve your inspirations
With your-sel
fOn your grave
To be left there
Ceaselessly
With you and
Your gravel mire
I say, touching zeniths
ReplyDeleteOf esteem and reverence
Amid the surge of successes
Make you all solitaire
Superlative !
Thank you Nan!
ReplyDeletethe poem just above this is so strong that this one just pales in comparison to it...cannibalism in marketing lingo...he he...but still...i really like the way you capture such complex emotions is a few words in every line..you sure have a gift urza...keep writing such beautiful verses yaar...keep going!
ReplyDeleteNIce.... Uz toooooooo goooooood!
ReplyDeletenice one...soul stirring..really good.
ReplyDeletebrought a lot of thoughts to my head... :) kudos!
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ReplyDeletei like this one !
ReplyDeletethe theme the central idea and all..
Hails :)
its not words that matters but the people who pour them out!
ReplyDeletethank you for your apppreciations!
uz datz really gr8..........m really inspired by ur idea thinking n the idea u want to deliver i thibk its the best frnd........soo soo soo much coool n intersting.....
ReplyDeletethank you faisal :)
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