January 31, 2009

Amid words

They say
Standing high
Amid the surge of heads
Make you all eminent
All adored
I say, touching zeniths
Of esteem and reverence
Amid the surge of successes
Make you all solitaire
Leave you to inspire
All “others”
Who anon swap you
Of the floor
Of the screen
And of the world
Carve your inspirations
With your-sel
fOn your grave
To be left there
Ceaselessly
With you and
Your gravel mire

11 comments:

  1. I say, touching zeniths
    Of esteem and reverence
    Amid the surge of successes
    Make you all solitaire

    Superlative !

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  2. the poem just above this is so strong that this one just pales in comparison to it...cannibalism in marketing lingo...he he...but still...i really like the way you capture such complex emotions is a few words in every line..you sure have a gift urza...keep writing such beautiful verses yaar...keep going!

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  3. nice one...soul stirring..really good.

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  4. brought a lot of thoughts to my head... :) kudos!

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  6. i like this one !
    the theme the central idea and all..


    Hails :)

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  7. its not words that matters but the people who pour them out!

    thank you for your apppreciations!

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  8. uz datz really gr8..........m really inspired by ur idea thinking n the idea u want to deliver i thibk its the best frnd........soo soo soo much coool n intersting.....

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