January 13, 2009

I will



Shattered dreams,
i will build them back
Broken wings,
1 can tend them back..
To the stars,
i aspire to fly
and shine like them,
i will give my best try..
My soul will reflect
smiles full of hopes,
With head held high,
i will walk lonely roads..


Inspired from "burnt dreams' by pink orchid!

16 comments:

  1. now that's truly an honour Prats..
    luv you for this...
    thanks for developing magic starting from my words and beautifying it through yours..
    :)

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  2. I Like this, as you might have understood by now ... Keep posting and reposting and posting again with replies/answers/responses to various posts here - so many ideas and so many thoughts all around ...

    Keep it up guys .. and have fun!!

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  3. I read the first line and i was like, damn another sad poem. I have resolved that i will try to write happy atleast, of something like that, and i thought it would be great if i would read hope too! and man it is so optimistic it filled me hope :)


    Thanks biya!


    and honestly, i love this inspiration business :D i think it is helping a lot in bonding us together !! isnt it?? :)

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  4. he its so amazing our lounge, i agree with you asbah we get inspiration to write from each others post, i got it from ste in my previous post

    well i am glad to see the happy ending

    'Things don't work my way,
    the way they choose is fine,
    i cherish life and smile,
    because i have to walk a thousand mile,,,'

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  5. nothing like being inspired "pink orchid" .. i love to extend or imagine different ngles to other;s write... n m particularly happy that i cn write bit happy post too.. :) keep writing n reading n commenting :)

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  6. right said Tan !! i hve been doin it since long but nice to see that no 1 minds it too... after all we all have equal right to express our feelings for any topic in any number of ways !!

    M LOVING IT :D

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  7. thts very aspirational..lets see how ling can u take that walk alone

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  8. same pinch asbah !! i too have promised to try writing happy things more this year :) !! and i love the bonding thing :) !!

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  9. nice inspiring lines Jack !! thanks for the comemnt :)

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  10. @Naveen : u challangeing me ??? he he ... just kidding ... :)

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  11. Kind of inspirational and rejuvenating...!!
    Thank u for a bright poem.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  12. thanks a lot Arjun :) i always look forward to your comments !!

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