January 20, 2009

Heart cries


Harsh
Words,
meant
to be heard
Mindless
Blames,
on my
love

Careless
Allegations,
piled high
on my soul

.
.
.
.
.
.
widened
rifts,
to break
each dream
Accentuated
pains,
on losing
love once gained

Heart cries
aloud and clear
not just your or mine
but Both ways......

15 comments:

  1. nice one yaar
    nice writing on the pain of heart
    "meri hasi par na jao dosto,
    ye to pal bhar ki hasti hai,
    ye to us gam ko chupane ke liye hai,
    jo aajkal meri basti hai"

    this is i wrote.

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  2. Wow! small but apt description of the heartrending pain of losing sumone!
    Losing your love is neva easy! Luvd it, Prats!

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  3. Hmmm ... I read it twice ... may be I'm not too good in commenting on poems ... I do not have much word to tell anything ... Just one thing:
    Love and spread Love all around you ... if this is what the author meant to do in life

    Sweet thought process - clarity!

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  4. last 2 lines says it all.. :)

    Wonderful thoughts..

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  5. @pretty
    no thanks yaar
    tum likhati hi itnaa accha ho
    me to har bar tumhari poems and stories ka wait karta hu

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  6. prats in few lines u enumerate the pain and love so well...i am amazed...gr8 as usual...

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  7. prats in few lines u enumerate the pain and love so well...i am amazed...gr8 as usual...

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  8. n i forgot to tell chirag , nice lines in hindi .. and thanks again :)

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  9. Glad u liked it Maeverick ! n losing ur love is indeed difficult to handle :)

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  10. glad u chose to comment on my writes dear Tan !

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  12. @pretty
    thanks u like the lines
    keep it up
    u are doing well in hindi writing

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  13. hey tweety, it isnt great .. but m glad u liked it :)

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