Harsh
Words,
meant
to be heard
Mindless
Blames,
on my
love
Careless
Allegations,
piled high
on my soul
.
.
.
.
.
.
widened
rifts,
to break
each dream
Accentuated
pains,
on losing
love once gained
Heart cries
aloud and clear
not just your or mine
but Both ways......
nice one yaar
ReplyDeletenice writing on the pain of heart
"meri hasi par na jao dosto,
ye to pal bhar ki hasti hai,
ye to us gam ko chupane ke liye hai,
jo aajkal meri basti hai"
this is i wrote.
Wow! small but apt description of the heartrending pain of losing sumone!
ReplyDeleteLosing your love is neva easy! Luvd it, Prats!
Hmmm ... I read it twice ... may be I'm not too good in commenting on poems ... I do not have much word to tell anything ... Just one thing:
ReplyDeleteLove and spread Love all around you ... if this is what the author meant to do in life
Sweet thought process - clarity!
last 2 lines says it all.. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful thoughts..
Cheers..!!
Arjun
thanks for the read chirag :)
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ReplyDeleteno thanks yaar
tum likhati hi itnaa accha ho
me to har bar tumhari poems and stories ka wait karta hu
prats in few lines u enumerate the pain and love so well...i am amazed...gr8 as usual...
ReplyDeleteprats in few lines u enumerate the pain and love so well...i am amazed...gr8 as usual...
ReplyDeleten i forgot to tell chirag , nice lines in hindi .. and thanks again :)
ReplyDeleteGlad u liked it Maeverick ! n losing ur love is indeed difficult to handle :)
ReplyDeleteglad u chose to comment on my writes dear Tan !
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ReplyDeletethanks u like the lines
keep it up
u are doing well in hindi writing
thanks Arjun !!
ReplyDeletehey tweety, it isnt great .. but m glad u liked it :)
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