November 30, 2008

Smile

auburn mist of ascending sun
Yonder on the soaring peak
creeps swiftly over the cliff
and spreads softly
upon the dewy grass
obliterating darkness
eliminating the gloomy thoughts
that have crawled to my mind
gazing in reverie
into the blue distances
and to the endless crimson horizon
being covered by the gleeful mentle
I smile atlast


.a.
May 05

6 comments:

  1. Beautiful poem. I love abstract poetry so much more.

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  2. This is quite surprising to have a comment from you actually.

    Thankyou. :)

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  3. hehe yeah i know. I'm very bad at this. I hardly comment but I do when I read something that really strikes me.

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  4. yeah ty ste.. but where is the comment on My Poem ?? :P

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  5. hey...lovely poem asbah...very nice!!
    "i smile atlast" - after all d description..these words gained a lot of weight...gud!

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