"Good morning Meera", wished Khan uncle. He was my favourite uncle in the building, Meera Apartments. Almost everyone in this building, right from the ground floor occupants to the Khan family on the 7th floor, knows me because i share my name with our building. Khan uncle cooks up the most amusing and make believe stories. He almost forced me into believing how the building was rechristened "Meera Apartments" after i was born to wade off evil spirits. And that they would take control if i were to move out of this building ever. So I should never ever move from this building and in doing so am helping out the other occupants. Khan uncle even jokes how i am famous in the whole of Ahmedabad. He even went to the extent of claiming that he had forwarded the story related to me and the building to both national and international news agencies and how i would be famous world over soon. I sometimes secretly wished i was. Being a celebrity was so cool. And Khan uncle said it with so conviction that i would do mock thanking sessions before my bedroom mirror everyday. That was Khan uncle. And i loved him from the core of my heart. He also enjoyed my company and i would at his place in all festivals as family. Be it Id or Onam or Diwali, we celebrated each of them like one big family. And i loved it this way.
"The lift is ot of order my dear. I fear that you will have to walk down the stairs all the way down sweetheart. I think Alaena and me would love to give you company all the way down in your marathon attempt my sunshine", Khan uncle giggled and i noticed Alaena in his arms. I recollected him mentioning that he was expecting his cousin's daughter and her child over on Republic day as it was a holiday. Alaena was as cute as it gets. All of 9 months, she gave her toothless smile which had me drooling all over her. Her cheeks were red and she was wearing a red frilled frock which went with her wheatish complexion. I had this desire to hold her the moment i saw her waving towards me. I didnt want to go to school all of a sudden. I wanted to play with this lil bundle of joy. I never liked babies much, but Alaena had won my heart with that toothless smile. I wanted to pull her red cheeks and plant a kiss on each of them.
"Sweetheart...i know you want to play with Alaena but your bus might be waiting for you. Moreover Alaena is here for a week so you can play with her as much as you wish. But school first!", Khan uncle had read my mind. I glanced at my watch. 8:44 am. All the cuddling and playing part could be carried out in the evening was what I said to myself and started walking downstairs. Khan uncle turned to my mom who was standing by the door all this while, "I think you can carry on with your household chores Mrs. Krishnan. No need to walk all the way down to the ground floor. I have to buy some bread from the market and we will accompany Meera downstairs. I will see to it that she gets on her school bus. You dont worry at all." And with that reassuring words to mom, we started our downward trek to the ground floor. Yes, a trek! I don't know how else would i describe climbing down the stairs from my 7th floor apartment. The two minutes it took us to reach the second floor seemed like hours. I glanced at my watch. It was 8:46 am and we were at the second floor.
All of a sudden I felt a high frequency vibration through my feet. I felt the ground getting displaced in the northerly direction. There was a strange sound accompanying this displacement. The sound resembling to that of heavy furniture being pulled over a rough surface. I had no clue as to what was happening. I turned backwards to see a horror stricken Khan uncle. Never had i seen him in such a state. A feeling of fear mixed with horror loomed large on his face. He looked at me and screamed, "Earthquake"!!!!
*gasps* i mean tell me how many surprises i am yet to await?
ReplyDeletebefore going to the story, have you felt the earthquake yourself sandeep? i only recently did for the third time in my life. it was 5.7 in the scale came on sep 5 th i guess, 11 48 am ! i had nothing to do so i just lied down and felt as if someone was shaking the bed.
the worst happened in Oct 2005!! it was almost 7 that time. i remember how everything was shaking, the mountains and everything felt as if they would fall on us, Allah o Akbar!!! May Allah save us from such catastrophes !! amen.
back to story i like the 9 months old alaena though :) I was never healthy when i was young and so sober i never smiled no matter how hard you'd try, lovely however, mom says. will you believe in all my childhood pics none has me smiling or grining or even a hint of a grin :) I am glad your Alaena smiles :) be it toothless or what. you have a power to create picture in reader's mind. your descriptions are picturesque! I am learning Mr Guru, I am learning :)
oh....thanx islex....he he...great mind from tht age! Thts y u didnt smile...poems n prose were makin their nests up there...he he he...ur comments were encouragin dear...
ReplyDeleteJust 1 comment! Hey bhagwaan!
oh....thanx islex....he he...great mind from tht age! Thts y u didnt smile...poems n prose were makin their nests up there...he he he...ur comments were encouragin dear...
ReplyDeleteJust 1 comment! Hey bhagwaan!
and yaa....was in gujarat during the dreaded 2001 earthquake which happend on 26th january, republic day. tht experience was something i can never forget ever....u were right islex in noticing tht i hv experienced earthquake myself n seen destruction n death in its wake!
ReplyDeleteand yaa....was in gujarat during the dreaded 2001 earthquake which happend on 26th january, republic day. tht experience was something i can never forget ever....u were right islex in noticing tht i hv experienced earthquake myself n seen destruction n death in its wake!
ReplyDeletelol, right, might be!!
ReplyDeleteehy shruti's is going to be 17 soon :)
your welcome. keep writing!
hmm i am not surprised though....expect such things atleast in sandy;s post ...part+ 2 hehehe....
ReplyDeletehmm mira apt haan....good thinking ...earthquake thing and everything is perfect....i am really happy for u dude.....such a perfect post which contains everything.....a little girls desire to play with small babies ......my sister does it wen she w+as back to home from school....she soon used to rush to my sisters house to see our little nephew
hmmm shruti going to be 17 haan
ReplyDeleteon sept 13....
17......17........17....the pre birthday celebrations begin here in this comment box!! countdown starts...1 hr 15 mins more to the feat....
ReplyDeletethanx ste for the comments...coming from the nariyal waala(he he) it means a lot...i see that you have also taken to writing stories big time bro...n the dark writer bit...he he..was out the whole day today...just returned n rushed back to the lounge...cheers!
and islex...will continue writing till i drop dead..he he!
ReplyDeleteHMM EVEN ME
ReplyDeleteWRITING IS MY HOBBY AND PASSION.....
I WILL WRITE MY EXPERIENCE FROM TURNING INTO A DARK WRITER FROM A HAPPY WRITER,,,....HEHEHE
AM NOW GONNA WRITE SOME THING REGARDING HOMO SEXUALITY ....A BOY WHO CUD NOT RESIST HIS HOMO SEXUALITY ACT AND FINALLY HIS PARENTS REACTIONS .....HEHEHE
AND YEAH SHRUUU BIRTHDAY
SO WE WILL CELEBRATE HERE HAAN
Haaapyyyyyyyy bday shruti......many many happy returns of the day!! cheers!
ReplyDeleteThis is the first time i read something written by You..and i must say it was wonderful.. Ur narration is Superb i must say..and that's the reason ur story was captivating frm beginning till the ENd..
ReplyDeleteKeep writing..
Cheers..
d kiddie's description is too good.. "toothless smile".. i lyked dat..
ReplyDeletewaitin for d rest.. keep writing.. cheers!!
@charu
ReplyDeletegr8 to know that the 2 parts hav managed to captivate u...thts da toughest thing to achieve...n thanx for da comments...hope tht u wud read my posts regularly 4m now on...he he...
@mona
ReplyDeleteThe kiddie's descriptn was d toughest of all. I think toothless smile helped tht a lot...wont keep u waiting for long. Hope not to disappoint da girl who teases meera krishnan...he he...cheers...
and i cant express how happy i am to see more members commenting. Hope wud see more jumpin in da fray....
ReplyDeleteCheers mona n charu!