Surprise element

I have been writing a short story from August.I was really confused with story as the beginning was supposed to be a family story ,but later on I changed it into some office stuffs .After that I introduced a girl and love part.I named my story as Family,Office and Love.

My very good friend Sandeep Balan,the member of this month in the Writer Lounge gave me some suggestions.He told me to add some twist and surprise element in the story.I thought for a while.

For this I had to sacrifice my Software Engg assignments.I wasted my precious time,thinking of his suggestions.Finally,I got a twist.
I decided that I will include our very own Sandeep in my story.He plays a cameo in my story lol

:p
;)

He is just to bring life to my story.He and his girld friend Richa have some improtant role in my story.

Thank you sandy bhaiyya.
Thank you for your suggestions and advice bhaiyya.

Sandeep's part will be posted on 11th August .
So ,all my friends here are requested to read our mussadi man creator's part.

Thank you

you can check the part
www.thesolitarywriter.blogspot.com