Safe surroundings deserted
Unveiling the terror
Insensitive to hurt
Conscience long killed
Ignoring the pleas
Death a friend
Etched aim destruction
Blasting others happiness
Onus of goals
Marred soul unaffected
Blasting own self
Emerge as winners
Retaliating against injustice
Sacrificing life happily
Posted @ Acrostic Only
The last line of the poem is very powerful. Great job.
ReplyDeleteA suicide bomber...the victims...you portrayed it well!
ReplyDeleteWell done Tweety!!!
sacrificing life with pleasuer.. yeah, wanted.. this was up to mark..! well said Tweets!
ReplyDelete@ofira, amity, leo
ReplyDeletethnks... :)
n yes...sometimes...even they are the victims...aftr all i cant imagine ny1 just throwing away their lives...
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting take on the prompt, the words you used made me think. Also the last stanza was a very different take on the prompt as it relate to what some believe, or how they are enticed to believe before they do this deadly act.
ReplyDelete@amias
ReplyDeleteyes, becuz smetimes maybe they are the victims too...maybe something did force them to commit such heinous act...nt that its a justification for the crime...maybe just a motive..