A pleasant sunday morning,
Was walking through the same street wer i saw her first,
The day wen i was struck by her beauty,
I decided to open up my heart today,
Watever happens am telling her today, "U r the queen of my heart"
I see her at a distance,
I slipped well may be her beauty made the floor slippery,
My heartrate surges as she nears me,
I am confident i'll tel her today,
She comes near me,
I open my mouth but only air comes out,
She passes me,
I keep on walking,
The end of an untold love story......
lol...happens many a time beo...many a time...happened to me too....a lot of times...lol...wid a lot of gals...hehe
ReplyDeletehmmm..looks more like a start 2 me ;)
ReplyDeleteWell written Dr.Kumar! I like the last line :)
ReplyDelete:-) cute story da...
ReplyDelete@FL,
ReplyDeleteYeah dude...... U r rt.......
It happens many a times......
But this is pue fiction.....
@The Bard,
ReplyDeleteMay be dude....
it may have a continuation....
@Roshni,
ReplyDeleteThanx Rosh
Thanx Arun
ReplyDelete..sweet one..!!!
ReplyDeletehey raj,i guess this happens with many people in every day life.Iam glad tht someone has expressed such beautiful feelings.But please write whole words and not short forms,i somehow like to read them that way..
ReplyDelete@Vidisha, Thanx for the comment
ReplyDelete@Crystal gal,
ReplyDeleteThans for the nice comments crystal..... sorry.... will use full wordings from now on.... thanx a ton for being a critic.....
Nice one!:) Hope it has a continuation...
ReplyDelete^_^