My feet were hanging off the edge of a cliff. There was deep water below, way below. I paused, and thought. Should I do this? Should I not? I thought about everyone who loved me, and that was one person. Then I thought about everyone who didn't love me. That was everyone.
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A few hours past, and my feet were still in the same position. I thought about Rajiv, my brother. He loved me. He really and truly loved me. It was devastate him to hear that I had died. As I turned around, ready to walk back home, I was met by Rajiv. "Rajiv. I can explain-
I began. Then he gave me a nudge. I remember thinking, what was happening? Then I fell down, down, down, in to the deep water. In an instant, I was gone. Gone forever.
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Loved it... eerie feeling! :)
ReplyDeleteYou are good at it Rosh! :)
Mwah to you my li'l one! :D
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ReplyDeletetrust is one thing that breaks so easily...bt this ws actually very unexpected..i mea...i hvnt got words to explain..hmmm...may b nice would do...
wow...nice one rosh!!! i loved the twist... !! way to go!
ReplyDelete@Aarthi- thanks so much! :) :D
ReplyDelete@Rose-thanks! yeah... trust breaks easily... through the littlest thing :)
@Mona- when I was typing this I
didn't plan the twist! it was unexpected to me too :) Thank you :)
Tat was completely unpredictable !!!
ReplyDeletewow eerie rosh ... u did it great
ReplyDeletewell written rosh...
ReplyDeleteSeriously didn't expect the twist...
@Thoorika- Thanks for reading :D
ReplyDelete@h- Thank you very much! :D
@Arun- Thanks a lot... :D
Superbly penned down rosh.....
ReplyDeleteIndeed a well said thought.....
Never trust anyone.... grt.....
@Dr.Kumar- Thanks for reading :) Trust is very fragile so treat it with care! :D
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