Story is here: http://weandwords.blogspot.com/2009/06/hellois-it-me-you-are-looking-for.html
Hello…is it me you are looking for?
as it is you, from my life, gone far.
I somehow lost many a night’s sleep
and my heart still hasn’t stopped to weep.
Hello…is it me you are looking for?
hard to believe that you were the star.
Everyday whenever the night turns into dawn
I detest as it reminds me that from my life, gone.
Hello…is it me you are looking for?
off late, in me, I am waging a civil war.
Iam unable to get even a single clue
of how I let you, from my life, go.
Hello…is it me you are looking for?
hasn’t at all healed, my heart’s scar.
The more about you, I sit and think
it drives me to the path of disaster’s brink.
Hello…is it me you are looking for?
will always be kept my heart, ajar.
As I write this, after work, this eventide
I just wished, that you were, beside.
the poem was superb dude...but didn't go thru the story....did yu write ds in ur blog too???
ReplyDeletenice selection of words....the feeling of pain is evident
superb poem dude...
ReplyDeletethe rhymings were great...
one of the top songs in my playlist... "hello" by L Ritchie...
Nice work :) Hope Lionel Ritchie is readin' this :D
ReplyDeleteCheers !!
Haha.. nice ... :)
ReplyDelete@freelancer,arun,hashan,~PrIncEsS nUcHu~ ..thanks people 4 d read :)
ReplyDeletehope d story is nice as well ;)
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