May 5, 2009

Road to nowhere -2 !!


Lone,
I
wander
along the
path of the darkness
I'm in a maze of sin and filth
I'm a demon that dwells in the darkest flame
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousTuesday, May 05, 2009 11:43:00 PM

    wow! This hit me like a fib nostalgia..:) it was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.. Hope the pain is a fiction though..

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  2. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, May 06, 2009 11:35:00 AM

    Thanks kajal..yes it is a fiction :D

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  3. AnonymousWednesday, May 06, 2009 12:58:00 PM

    arey, hashan try somethin other than fib na! :)

    u write this brilliant we all know! try a haiku, acrostic, loop! :D somethin! :D

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  4. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, May 06, 2009 2:08:00 PM

    Yes sir,Will definitely attempt other styles..will come up with some sinquains..
    Thank you so much Leo :) I treasure your comments..i mean it

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  5. Yamini MeduriWednesday, May 06, 2009 2:34:00 PM

    :) excellent FIB...!!!!

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  6. SaimWednesday, May 06, 2009 3:29:00 PM

    good one:)

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  7. The Solitary WriterWednesday, May 06, 2009 4:29:00 PM

    sheer beauty....nice

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  8. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, May 06, 2009 6:36:00 PM

    thanks Yamm :))

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  9. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, May 06, 2009 6:36:00 PM

    @ comfortably numb

    Thank you :D

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  10. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, May 06, 2009 6:37:00 PM

    @ Ste

    Thank you bro :D
    love your response :))

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  11. AnonymousWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:55:00 PM

    i love the fact that someone else write feelings you have.

    i am feeling exactly the same thing.

    relating to it, i loved it!

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  12. hasHAN hazaRIKASaturday, May 09, 2009 6:04:00 PM

    Thanki Asbi :D

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