May 29, 2009

Owly Night

"Owwwwwwwwwwww." What was that? Suddenly I saw a glimmering light from a branch on a evergreen tree, which looked green even at night. Then, I saw another glimmering light. "Owwwwwwwwwwww." Aaaah! I really need to know what that noise is, I thought. I turned on the lamp. Oh. It was an owl. It was only then I remembered that owl's are nocturnal... and have eyes that glimmer in the dark.


I hope you liked the 70 words fiction attempt! Well... to be honest, this was supposed to be 55 fiction, but then it was too long so I invented a 70 fiction :P Btw- I changed my signature because the other one was too blurry :)

4 comments:

  1. That was very smart! When I first saw the tag "70 fiction", I was like, oh gosh! even a 12 year old knows more about writing styles than me!"
    hehe! I liked the owly story, very to the point and cute :)

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  2. wow....70-fiction...haha..!!!

    and the first attempt was goood..!!!

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  3. lol... now if anyone wants to do 70 fiction they can! But they have to say roshwrites invented it =]
    Thanks for commenting Miss Sunshine & yamini meduri- I really appricate any good or constructive critism comments!
    roshwrites

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  4. lmao.....70 word??? lol....wow kid you are great...cheers

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