May 19, 2009

my take for love laced Tuesday :P

That honey sunken gaze

Fixed on my face,

And I was,

Trembling,

With blood emptying from veins

And rushing to the cheeks

Too glad to speak,

Overwhelmed by his presence,

Yet,

‘What ever I feel

I ought to conceal

The deepest secret of my heart,

Let it not reveal,’

But when our eyes met;

He came near and said

"Trying to avoid me"

"Darling, you are trying in vain"

"Because every time your heart beats"

"I can hear it whispering my name."




Unable to write, i sought for refuge in my older diary and found this :)

written in Oct 04.

.a.

7 comments:

  1. every time your heart beats...
    I can hear it whispering my name....

    Lovely n very Romantic....Loved the line very much...

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  2. haaay.. uff ab hum kya kahein asbah.. aapne loot liye bus.. sacchi.. :)

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  3. I already tld u how beautiful dis was!

    Splendidly done...we need to publish Asbah's diaries....her memoirs....wld b a hit....wat wid each of her works bein a masterpiece!

    Luvd dis one! *hugs* :)

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  4. My god..!! Asbah... i totally second Maverick on this... U r just too good asbi.. a class apart.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  5. lol !!!

    ty for all these kind words people :) *owes a lot*

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