Fixed on my face,
And I was,
Trembling,
With blood emptying from veins
And rushing to the cheeks
Too glad to speak,
Overwhelmed by his presence,
Yet,
‘What ever I feel
I ought to conceal
The deepest secret of my heart,
Let it not reveal,’
But when our eyes met;
He came near and said
"Trying to avoid me"
"Darling, you are trying in vain"
"Because every time your heart beats"
"I can hear it whispering my name."
Unable to write, i sought for refuge in my older diary and found this :)
written in Oct 04.
.a.
Coool.. this is nice..
ReplyDeleteevery time your heart beats...
ReplyDeleteI can hear it whispering my name....
Lovely n very Romantic....Loved the line very much...
haaay.. uff ab hum kya kahein asbah.. aapne loot liye bus.. sacchi.. :)
ReplyDeleteI already tld u how beautiful dis was!
ReplyDeleteSplendidly done...we need to publish Asbah's diaries....her memoirs....wld b a hit....wat wid each of her works bein a masterpiece!
Luvd dis one! *hugs* :)
My god..!! Asbah... i totally second Maverick on this... U r just too good asbi.. a class apart.. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers..!!
Arjun
this was so much superb !!
ReplyDeletelol !!!
ReplyDeletety for all these kind words people :) *owes a lot*