May 14, 2009

Death Becomes Her


My diary entries:

3 May  09:

She had the most bewitching face i've ever seen...i just couldn't stop staring at her...I desired her...The frenzy begun....The predator form my inside couldn't hide anymore...

She left the club...alone...I stalked her...She didn't even notice my presence...
She paced herself thro the narrow streets....and ...I missed her...didn't have a clue where she went...tried hearing her footsteps in the silent night...couldn't...

The prey gave me the slip....


4 May 09:

Went to the same club...waited for her...waited...waited...she didn't show up....
Got a feeling that she is not gonna make this easy....


5 May 09:

Waited....in vain..
swept thro the streets where i lost her that day...in vain...
Never has a prey made me feel so ineffectual...
I became obsessed...


6,7,8.....13 May 09:

Waited...in vain...

But i couldn't resist....
Her thoughts haunted me...


Today....

I lost my diary...dunno where i kept it....
In the club....my treasure was waiting for me....I smiled...
Waited for her to leave...stalked her...
The weather was damn cold...
she walked thro the same narrow streets....
She paced herself...I think she saw me following her....
And cornered....in the end She really made it too easy...

She turned...She wasn't panicking...her face had no signs of fear...
I knew i can have her at my will...I was going to relish this forever...
I slowly advanced towards her...she didn't even move or shout...she was in a shock..
I came so close to her...
she was pale...couldn't get any paler...she was not even shivering...

She smiled viciously....
Her smile turned to laughter...
I  stepped back a little...Her laughter got loud...
I saw those sharp gleaming incisors by the ridge of her crimson lips...
She said "I'm thirsty"...

  

P.S - Made this post with a lotta ideas n inspiration from Rose...Thank you Rose...had a great evening writing with her....
         
Ciao...

16 comments:

  1. Very creepy da......
    Its as good as a movie......
    Keep writing stuff like this.....

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  2. @pinky
    Thanks kajal...wanted to get on the vampire frenzy...

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  3. @kumar
    thanks very much da...will do it...

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  4. Arun u could've added a more beautiful vampire chick

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  5. the pic is very scary :) and story is very creepy dude..

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  6. @kumar
    i wanted creepy bro...so chose this...

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  7. @hashan...
    Thanks man...yeah the pic is strikingly scary....

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  8. ok da..... next time u write search for a vampire which is both creepy nd seducive

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  9. I loved this so much I wrote her side of the story!

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  10. Wow!
    scary n beautifully written:)
    Thanks by the way...I too enjoyed writin' with you:)
    The scary description helped..you see :P:P

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  11. @rose..
    thanks once agin rose..
    yeap ,,the description helped...good call..

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  12. u know .. i wanted to write a 55 fiction on this story .. but not now !! you wrote it too well :)

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