May 15, 2009

Cold blooded and Cold hearted...

He and She decided to finish the entire family before dawn...rather more... wanted to wait till dawn before finishing them...They enjoy playing with their prey....Torturing them physically and emotionally...Only after extricating the last shreds of torment...when their preys literally begged them to kill...would they kill them...

They were sleeping peacefully....not any more...
They dragged the entire family to the living room...their grand stage...
Father ,mother and the two little ones...
The warmth of the blood , the fear in their eyes , the thumping of their hearts...all too enticing...
But they were aces...not their first time...They were artists in their show...

"Please...don't hurt them" begged the father and mother...

She smiled..."which do u want to do first..?? the girl or the little boy..??  the little one looks yummy..."
The mother begged Him with a shrilling cry....

"For once ...can't we leave them alone..?? "  He pleaded in whispers ..clear only to Her ears...
She couldn't believe Her ears...Rage pierced thro Her eyes...She gave him a look of disgust...

"Weak...you've become..."  without a moment to contemplate....She sprung on both the kids...smeared Her fangs with their warm blood....quenching Her insatiable thirst...


P.S - A sadistic take on vampires ....Its horror friday ..rite..??

Ciao

17 comments:

  1. Yippeee!! First! Anyways!!! amazing..i loved the last lines..full of action and it gave me a feeling of blood..aaah..

    lOVELY!

    Smiles!

    Sonshu

    P.S: I still love vamps!

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  2. @sonshu
    Thanks sonshu...feeling of bllod...??? :-)
    I still love vamps too...

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  3. The pic..aaah.. killing..

    Very well written..

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  4. @sonshu...
    i thought the pic was kinda sexy... :-)

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  5. @comfortably numb..
    thanks man..


    @chaarz
    thanks man...
    as i said...i thought the pic looed kinda sexy...jus my taste ..eh..??

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  6. enticing? hell!

    why the vampiress had to be the colder one ? *wonders*

    anyway, nicely woven!

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  7. Dude
    you are becoming dark day by day :P
    I enjoyed it..a lot..scary!!

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  8. @asbah
    well these two were a couple of sadistic vamps...so associated em with 'cold'...
    n thank u...

    @rose
    Yeh...thanks rosie...I njoy writin dark i think... :)

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