April 15, 2009

MORE ORANGEE

Misdirected into this haphazard world
Of confusion, I try to
Regain a kind of
Enlightenment about the direction that leads to El Dorado.

Orange is a simple fruit
Reason behind why it influenced my life
And redirected me towards El dorado is still unknown
Nothing is clear!
God only knows what’s happening to me
Encouragement has finally come in a train filled with the oranges.
Enthusiastically, I board that train and fall on the oranges, El Dorado here I come…


With gr8 powers of having a gr8 poetry teacher,comes gr8 responsibility of being a good student...i hope i am on the right track..Thank you Prats for the inspiration....

11 comments:

  1. Wonderful !! great for the first try :) !! You made me proud !!

    *sniff* !!

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  2. Hope people wont chuck me out of the lounge for turning everyone into a poet/poetess !!

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  3. hehehehe.. LOL Prats :))
    very fruity one..:)
    hey u didnt tell me your name :(

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  4. prats is crying? :o

    wow, it must be good! it is good! wow! :)

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  5. @ prats

    wow..I need that encouragement.... :)

    I surely venture out in this territory and make u proud.... :)

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  6. @ leo

    arre yeh khushi ke aasu hae... :P

    thank u for dropping by.... :)

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  7. @ hashan

    thank u....
    My name is More Orangee..... :D :P

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  8. @ disha

    So happy that you came back... :)
    thank u....

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